ehhh its just geetar and a drum machine i dont have good vocals and would like to have someone sing for it it has some good guitar in it i think well please tell me what you thinkk

Again, a nice idea and a well constructed track.  I think it's let down by the poor quality of recording, and the out of tune guitars, and the tinny sound that may be a product of how you record it.

ah okay, cool

bass drum sounds great, but the snare is a little low volume.

again, those tinny guitars, as if they were mic'd semi-acoustics, that's something requiring some attention. hearing a lot of plectrum click. however they do set an interesting feel to the song, has some clarity and agression to it.

somehow, images from city hopping days come to mind... tall buildings, architecture, foreign food...

FUCKING HELL MAN

Frustration

I think is a really great song, just need to be better recorded

Cheers

This song has a really nice construction to it. It's well played and thought out. But the drum machine is a bit annoying. The pounding cymbals don't help out much either. But like I said this is a good song and has a lot of tight guitar work, just needs more production work.