The same song. The same crap recording but I'm proud that I found someone who added professional drums.

Thank you PuppetXeno. 

I think it really brings the song forward - tell me what you think!

Original Description was

No it's not a Travis Cover ;-)
Maybe it inspired me but i turned the image of the flowers upside down - it's just my kind of way being melancholic ;-)
I think they are my best lyrics so far.  Hope u like them

This my personal Present for all u guys out there. It's dedicated to the fantastic community of BandAmp.

I want to thank Hell-Mood for playing this fantastic Bass Line. 
Without him, this song wasn't half as good as it's now  (not very good of course but Ok i think)

The flowers in my Window they are dead
I just forgot them coz I have
some trouble in my head
No it's not that I'm sad
It's just my life and thoughts of what I had
so dear friend I tell you that
the Flowers in my Window they are dead

It may rain down the sun may shine
it doesn't matter anyway
I see my life through a Glass of Time
and everytime I look behind I see flowers passing by

The flowers in my Window they are dead
It's not your fault  so go ahead
find another one instead
it's ok I think I'm glad
 It's just my life and thoughts of what I had
so dear friend I tell you that
the Flowers in my Window they are dead

Repeat Refrain 2x
....
I see flowers passing by
I see flowers passing by
Time's passing by

What a difference - you're right, they really add to the overall feeling of the track.  It's funny, you say that it's "the same crap recording" but I thought the original recording was pretty good!  I imagine Puppet thought the same or he wouldn't have bothered adding the drums to it 
IMO it still needs a little something extra as I start to want another sound in the mix at about 3:30 (although you bring the reverse guitar in not long after that) - I almost think that strings could be added (gulp!)
All in all, I think this is a pretty good song - I like it!
 

Yep, really brings it out as you said. Pup did good.
I must not have heard the original but I like the keys, cool panning effects.
Nice imagery on the lyrics and vocals are getting better, one day I'm expecting a complete turn around in which you are smiling while you sing and maybe some sappy strings in the back and maybe a tamborine, too.

cool to find it here

I kinda went with one of many possibilities with those drums though, I think that's what Amused's songs are excellent material for - and ofcourse I think his style is highly compatible with mine.
I only spent a few hours on this, so it's pretty much a draft after all, but I am ofcourse happy with the results (I deem them "sufficing") so all in all, this song has become more or less a preview to more Amused / PX collaborations...

HAHAHAAHAHAAHAHA BASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry I had to.
Ummm..... I simply don't feel comfortable critiquing this song as there's no way I could do it better.

ehhh I don't know if I understood what you mean.
But you can criticize me even if you think it's very crap. But stay constructive   

Instrumental a nice song,your vocals are getting better I think you would have a very nice sound if you sing every word correctly but try to keep the sound you have now it sounds depressive and I like that so keep on working on your vocal and try to fill me with silence

Had a listen but couldnt put it on again. The vocals are fairly tough to endure. Spend some time locating the key your voice is in and try to aim the songs you write in future to that general area/ The lyricism was good and the track itself minus the vocals was cool, just try to nail down your key for singing.

Really interesting song....   Great improvement with Puppet's drum work... Improve your vocals a bit, and you will be able to get some demo's together to ship off to try for a recording contract... 
     not too bad....
                    JimK

Well, not my style. Your voice is not completely good; sometimes you get out of tune.
The music is ok. The drums too. But I don't know... there's something i don't like.
May be a keyboard on the back or a more powerful guitar.
But that's my personal opinion.

      > Iszil