Pretty Little Nerd |
Ha, I'll stop doing girly songs soon, I promise...
I wrote this in 5 minutes, when I was mucking around with different MIDI sounds.
Just a short one, I imagine it as an intro to an album.
OK then, after pressure from the nutcases, here are the lyrics:
I love the way you feel
I love how you reveal to me
The sweeter side of you
Which captivates me so
I love the way I feel
I love when I'm with you
I'd be happy if we spent
The day alone
I love the way you talk
A beautiful echo
Which swirls around my heart
And makes me see that
I'd be happy with you
My Pretty Little Nerd
I wrote this in 5 minutes, when I was mucking around with different MIDI sounds.
Just a short one, I imagine it as an intro to an album.
OK then, after pressure from the nutcases, here are the lyrics:
I love the way you feel
I love how you reveal to me
The sweeter side of you
Which captivates me so
I love the way I feel
I love when I'm with you
I'd be happy if we spent
The day alone
I love the way you talk
A beautiful echo
Which swirls around my heart
And makes me see that
I'd be happy with you
My Pretty Little Nerd
pretty & melodic, but you're right, you totally sing like a girl
Writing this as I listen to the track, so far it seems like a very long intro - or perhaps an ending to a much longer track.
It's a little weak for my taste, and .......there it is over!!!
Yup, too short and not enough happens.
Taking all that into account, I think there's definite promise there in the song. The overall mix is pretty good - it just needs to go into something different IMO
It's a little weak for my taste, and .......there it is over!!!
Yup, too short and not enough happens.
Taking all that into account, I think there's definite promise there in the song. The overall mix is pretty good - it just needs to go into something different IMO
hhmmm well the soundscape is *lovely*. like fairies dancing in a magic forest...
I love the title... but I can't hear the lyrics that well. will you post them? ... In the lyrics review maybe?
must be a pretty enjoyable intermezzo when on a mushroom trip
when you hit the higher register with your vocals, I'm hearing a resemblence with a certain U2 song. if you want to stop sounding girly (don't really see why you should btw), perhaps that's the direction you should be thinking.
I love the title... but I can't hear the lyrics that well. will you post them? ... In the lyrics review maybe?
must be a pretty enjoyable intermezzo when on a mushroom trip
when you hit the higher register with your vocals, I'm hearing a resemblence with a certain U2 song. if you want to stop sounding girly (don't really see why you should btw), perhaps that's the direction you should be thinking.
it's like wild man.... yeah.... crazy.... wild..... it's like a wild ride on a purple cloud through the dark milk chocolate sky....
umm.... ok.. sorry, flashback.... anyway.. the song is pretty cool actually... could be so much more... or less.... but would prefer more...
JimK
umm.... ok.. sorry, flashback.... anyway.. the song is pretty cool actually... could be so much more... or less.... but would prefer more...
JimK
good stuff |
coldplay meets jeff buckley pretty cool
good stuff |
coldplay meets jeff buckley pretty cool
good stuff |
coldplay meets jeff buckley pretty cool
I agree the title caught my attention here but i couldn't make out the lyrics out as much as i would have liked to, but the song sounds promising,
but please, please, please, post the lyrics Timotheus...
but please, please, please, post the lyrics Timotheus...
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