#1January 2nd, 2006 · 07:23 AM
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United Kingdom
Pretty Little Nerd
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This song is not in a battle


Ha, I'll stop doing girly songs soon, I promise...
I wrote this in 5 minutes, when I was mucking around with different MIDI sounds.
Just a short one, I imagine it as an intro to an album.

OK then, after pressure from the nutcases, here are the lyrics:


I love the way you feel
I love how you reveal to me
The sweeter side of you
Which captivates me so

I love the way I feel
I love when I'm with you
I'd be happy if we spent
The day alone


I love the way you talk
A beautiful echo

Which swirls around my heart
And makes me see that
I'd be happy with you
My Pretty Little Nerd

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#2January 2nd, 2006 · 12:05 PM
25 threads / 23 songs
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United States of America
pretty & melodic, but you're right, you totally sing like a girl
#3January 2nd, 2006 · 03:33 PM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Writing this as I listen to the track, so far it seems like a very long intro - or perhaps an ending to a much longer track.
It's a little weak for my taste, and .......there it is over!!!
Yup, too short and not enough happens.
Taking all that into account, I think there's definite promise there in the song.  The overall mix is pretty good - it just needs to go into something different IMO
#4January 2nd, 2006 · 03:40 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
hhmmm well the soundscape is *lovely*. like fairies dancing in a magic forest...

I love the title... but I can't hear the lyrics that well. will you post them? ... In the lyrics review maybe?

must be a pretty enjoyable intermezzo when on a mushroom trip

when you hit the higher register with your vocals, I'm hearing a resemblence with a certain U2 song. if you want to stop sounding girly (don't really see why you should btw), perhaps that's the direction you should be thinking.
#5January 2nd, 2006 · 09:35 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
it's like wild man.... yeah.... crazy....  wild.....   it's like a wild ride on a purple cloud through the dark milk chocolate sky.... 
    umm.... ok.. sorry,  flashback....  anyway.. the song is pretty cool actually... could be so much more... or less....   but would prefer more...
                           JimK
#6January 4th, 2006 · 05:38 PM
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21 posts
United Kingdom
lol, I don't know what you guys were expecting when you saw a title with both the words 'little' and 'pretty' in it!
#7January 5th, 2006 · 05:00 AM
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12 posts
United States of America
good stuff
coldplay meets jeff buckley pretty cool
#8January 5th, 2006 · 05:00 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
12 posts
United States of America
good stuff
coldplay meets jeff buckley pretty cool
#9January 5th, 2006 · 05:00 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
12 posts
United States of America
good stuff
coldplay meets jeff buckley pretty cool
#10January 5th, 2006 · 07:13 PM
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United States of America
ehhh its got its ups and downs but its  better than what i make i loved it
#11January 9th, 2006 · 04:22 PM
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United States of America
Well thats a pretty little song.
#12January 11th, 2006 · 11:47 PM
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Indonesia
i like the song,...
#13January 14th, 2006 · 09:26 AM
20 threads / 18 songs
93 posts
United Kingdom
tis like travelling the topographical ocean......aaahhh
#14January 16th, 2006 · 06:51 AM
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13 posts
Iraq
Pretty Little Nerd
Ok, the title caught my eye. I actually liked the song, but I would also like to see the words. They didn't stand out as much as I would have liked them to.
Good job though, maybe put a little more time into it, if you want to that is.
#15February 7th, 2006 · 02:58 PM
I agree the title caught my attention here but i couldn't make out the lyrics out as much as i would have liked to, but the song sounds promising,
but please, please, please, post the lyrics Timotheus...
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