Defenitely gonna rerecord to get timing right and sing better... i was just anxious to get it online to get feedback on the song.. so let me know what everyone thinks!!

beautifull piano and strange sing sound, its a good way to express yourself keep going on

hey thanks.. im going to re-sing it just cuz it wasn't sung loud enough, when i boosted it in the program it got raspy, then i used effects to get rid of the rasp.. so it gave it a peculiar sound, but it will sound better when i re-sing it

The guitar is a little too staccato for my tastes, and the recording of the voice is very strange  Obviously you know that, which is why you want to redo it!

The piano is nice; simplistic, but nice all the same (and believe me, much better than my piano playing!)

I would love to hear this with the new (much louder, much cleaner)vocals, a softer effect on the guitar, and perhaps some strings in the background.

It's a nice composition though.

Please re-record it....   The guitar effects are way wrong for the song,  but this has potential to be a good song.....
       Let me know when you get it re-recorded...
                                JimK

good start, think it needs some strings behind the piano, actually like the effect of the voice, kinda hollow sounds pretty cool. i was waiting for it to kick into something heavier, but again great start none the less. good job.

Why is it all in my left ear? Have my headphones just broken or is it recorded like that? 
Its nice. Need lots of work. I like the way the voice is recorded. You have a nice voice.

yeh the voice is the best think about this i think the intro piano is lacking..maybe strings would help maybe just re recording...but that tinny voice is excellent

The voice rocks, but the guitar has too much effect. It sounds like you're using a Crate with a crappy Drive amp. And the pickup configuration you used was horrible for this song.
Other than that, great work!

Piano arrangements are fine. May be increase the voice volume, but its effect if ok.
Definitely the guitar sounds is out of place. Please change it.
A better quality could definitely make this a lot better.

      > Iszil