#1December 25th, 2005 · 07:50 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
India
Purer .
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This song is not in a battle


Recorded on acoustic guitar . This is my second song , after Lead . Let me know if this is worth listening to . Thanks!

Empty vessels have a choice
and as i sing  this broken voice
is searching for something
to call my own

time will tell if i have a say
i will wait and i will stay
and for you i will pray
anyway

and as i try to lose control
as you mend this big black hole
i can't fake my breath
anymore

what you said will remain
it won't wash away the pain
of losing what i could have had
forevermore

but purer
is all i have
and purer
is all you can get
is purer
you have made me
purer
mark my words
but is this my final answer
purer
every single moment to me
you are
purer
you are purer


together we fear
what never was here before
our minds are so alike
you shouldn't be scared anymore

curing me is curing you
so tell me what to do
the worst is not over now
but i ended up searching you

and as i sing this one more time
i want to hear your words
and from rooftops and broken avenues
we will get


purer ........

pure is not

purer
we only have purer

what's me is what's you

you will only get purer



....and so much for my stolen ending
so much for the broken time you gave
i will steal a moment's glance and
look at you is all i have

and everything is losing power
people places that we share
and if our thoughts would just sit together
i just wish i would be there



just don't walk away .

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#2December 25th, 2005 · 01:28 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
37 posts
Israel
it sounds like you are unnaturally streaching the syllables a bit..like the feel though. do you have something in hindi?.
#3January 13th, 2007 · 04:15 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
India
its good.
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