This is a song of another friend he played in band before called ROVIC and they played at rockweekend in Holland made a CD but he needed to quit the band because of his studies now he plays from time to time a little bit of music with a friend and this is one song he recorded hope you enjoy it

not to shabby
i like the lyrics, but its a little soft for my taste.
strong progression, nice beggening hook, strong chorus, i think you he could had done a little more with the bridge, but thats fine.
good job
'B'

I quite like this. It has a nice flow to it. That  simple, gentle and sad sound. I like it.