This is called "Do your eyes still water". I just wrote it today. Guitar, second guitar/solo and drums. Second time singing. thanks for any feedback.

Lyrics

Do your eyes still water
the flowers I painted for you

Do your eyes still water
the flowers I painted for you

At least once a week
At least once a week
say they do

Do your eyes still water
the flowers I painted for you

If you do it on Sunday
by Tuesday they should bloom

At least once a week
say they do

Very minimalist - love those lyrics

Your guitar flows better than in your last upload -

those drums are a little low in the mix, but overall, considering you're pretty new at this, very well done in the end result: the atmosphere it sets, works.

ok keep working on it you have an interesting style, especially because of those minimalist yet very poetic lyrics.

thanks for the feedback on this and the other PuppetX...

reminds me of ween!
hey man, this is a really great song ( i am not joking, this is my style of sound right here )
just tighten up the vocals and add a couple more parts. i would love to hear you sing in a higher registar in this song.
keep it up - great work