A song about these freaky Internet loves.

I never met you so you can't say anything
I never met you so I won't regret a thing
I never met you but i remember your name
it's Claine my beautiful girl
such a perfect skin
you're so calmly you never said a word
claine a foreign mystery in your eyes
I feel your warmth every time I touch the screen

It's hard coz I don't have you here by my side
we never part so let imagination be our guide
and as long as love flows through my cables
I write my own fable

Liked the idea, but I think it still needs a lot of work.  I think your voice follows the guitar too much over the first seconds, and it goes out of tune at some points.  I really liked the rhythm guitar and the harmonies. Maybe the guitar at the chorus is too loud.

The lyrics are great!! tragic... and hilarious at the same time!

Yea, you seem to be strong in your texts.... That's very good....

Well I like the music bit of it, I don't know what guitar(s) and software you're using but you get it to sound great, and what kind of synth is that?

I'm not really getting the rhythm you're singing in at the first half of the song though, but overall this is pretty wavy.

would LOVE to hear you try some drums... a free drum machine is Hammerhead, maybe you can try fixin beat loops in that, export to .wav and cut and paste them to your things. It's just an idea... Hammerhead may be too synthetic for your purposes but I believe you can put your own samples in it too (not sure though, bc I only played with it once and don't need it myself)

well keep it up. btw I saw you have a link to a site with more of your material. I'll check it out when I have the time

All songs start somewhere , just keep working on it.

ROFL!!!!!!!!! PX is right the lyrics are depressing yet hilarious at the same time! Oh man, that's awesome.

I didn't really like the elec. guitar solo near the end, i don't know what effect you used but I don't like it.
Also, I think the accent doesn't really work for this song, but that's not your fault.
Great guitar rythms all the way through.

Made me laugh in a disturbed kinda way. Um, yer, needs a bit of work, what more can I say.