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#1December 19th, 2005 · 02:07 AM
46 threads / 33 songs
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Score: 71.0%
Rank: 10th
Battle: 2006-10

I came up with this song a couple of months ago. Then while I was recording Blessed I kind of rememebered it again. This song is in Hindi. Hopefully u will enjoy it.

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#2December 20th, 2005 · 12:32 PM
34 threads / 16 songs
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hey, your voice sounds much better in Hindi! I wish i had the lyrics though... 
#3December 22nd, 2005 · 12:08 PM
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Very beautiful! I love this style. Nice progression and composition. It has a wonderful flow. I would just say tighten up all the parts a bit. Would you be willing to translate?
Also, if you compress the vocal, the low parts will be more audible and not drop out of the mix. Very nice composition, again.
#4December 22nd, 2005 · 12:20 PM
118 threads / 55 songs
3,086 posts
Yes, it sounds very interesting. Hindi seems to be a pretty cool language -

Well you know about your production issues (isn't disturbingly bad btw), so

on the good side is that this is once again a beautiful song, I really love that flute. Thinking BIG, I can imagine a top quality production of this with hand drum percussion tracks (def. involving a tambourine) and a nice flowy fretless bass, and at some points a feminem backing vocal or something.

that would be *really* awesome.

for now, good job!
#5December 25th, 2005 · 01:49 AM
13 threads / 12 songs
37 posts
you sound much more natural in hindy! stick to it and who knows? sabkuch milega.
#6December 26th, 2005 · 03:24 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
124 posts
Very nice. Loved the flute. The melody with the Indian voice inflections were beautiful. The flute was a great touch. Some acoustic guitar sections were a little boomy, but that can be fixed. Great job. We're doing the Christmas thing in Canada right now. God bless you and yours.

#7December 27th, 2005 · 04:23 AM
6 threads / 5 songs
12 posts
Reminds me back in india..
#8December 28th, 2005 · 04:48 PM
96 posts
United States of America
beutifull flow
yeah, i like your native tounge - wonderfull tonage!
i am curious what the lyrics are ( in english would be nice ) mayby you could post it.
is the tin flut making an apperence here againe.

i would love to hear some harmony on the vocals and less reverb.
great work
#9January 1st, 2006 · 01:53 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
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The english translation
K I am bad with the translation. It is not a word by word translation. It probably wont fit to the music as well. But this is what the basic meaning is. If it sounds a bit goofy well I couldn't help wht say in one language doesn't always sound poetic in another cause the  semiotics vary and and so do the symbols.

This mortal heart of mine,
Is just for you,
As the evening falls,
I begin to go crazy.

The air brings a new scent,
And the nightangle sings somewhere,
And all I do is sigh with you memory.
This mortal...

The air taunts me,
Asks me whr I am leaving for,
As my eyes wander in your search,
Every moment streches on to hours.
This mortal....
#10January 1st, 2006 · 03:04 PM
7 posts
the compositions good..but the guitar goes a li'l haywire..but good work
#11April 12th, 2006 · 02:24 AM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Hmm... I just noticed. The lyrics sound rather corny in english...
#12April 12th, 2006 · 07:20 AM
28 threads / 20 songs
255 posts
nice quiet song, good song to listen to late at night when everything is quiet. i found that after listening to it on headphones the second time round rather than speakers it gives it an even better effect and makes some of those quiet vocals more clear.

Very peaceful song, i liked it. i agree in a professional mix of this song drums would be nice but i was thinking more of a ride cymbal kind of thing rather than tambourine, i reckon it's just too peaceful to have a tambourine shaking and smacking in the background.

gave it 70%
#13May 2nd, 2006 · 04:24 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Thnks for posting people.
#14May 5th, 2006 · 10:19 AM
2 threads / 1 songs
7 posts
Nice slow song
The flute and the lead sounds good
#15May 5th, 2006 · 03:25 PM
21 posts
United States of America
Mellow, and I actually love the quality of it, because it sounds like an old hindi song or something. Freakin lovin it. Were you using an electric guitar? If so, I wouldn't. If not, forgive my retarded ears.
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