this one of my heavy riffs its not real good quality sound but it still sounds allright tell me what you think or just rate it

I like it - gd work man.
what u could do 4 a hevey sorta sound, just get rid of the phaser, n crank up the drive (well thts comin 4rm me n i have a line 6 spider 2 112, i have no clue what u have)

still VGD.

thanks man

You need to add some bass and drums to that riff man, it's awesome!. Also somewhere you need a second guitar harmonizing with it, would be so good. Agreed with defalco, turn off the phaser, and crank up the drive!! Also, the ending is a bit abrupt, don't know how you could sort that out. But, nice riff!

Fucking wick. u need lots of crash simbles with a fast drum riff . its good 

yeah i kinda abandoned this song a while it was while when i made it up and im stuffed if i can remember how i played properly now and i kinda made lotsa better songs now wish i had time to put em down

Just a vist to fellow aussie 2 years late by the looks of it hey man what's sup?
The riff need a band to nail its ass right?

WoW! Thats really cool, sounds like you used a lot of octaves to get those sounds? Yeah but I agree with everyone on the distortion...and band

hey thanks for the feed back guys I've redone this song a few times i pretty much got it finished all i need to do is re-record it or something i got some better gear now too so the quality would be better oh and yes i used octaves to achieve the awesome sound 

Very interesting sound,the song in it selfs sounds awesome.Would love to hear it in a complete version.I'm sure it most rock hard.

Cool sound, so what does it sound like these days? It's about 5 years old now , are you going to let us hear the finished product? 

I think that if you blend this with some heavy beats and some samples, this can be a pretty tight riff. A positive step forward to making a killer track! Big Daddy @ MassiveMedia Productions

yeah i dont know i if i will record it i want to get a decent soundcard and a good program first if i do