#1December 13th, 2005 · 04:50 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Trekking Away
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This song is not in a battle


Honestly, I try to be honest with what I play.
I hope you'll enjoy listening.
Critiques, comments, queries, friendly words, always welcomed.
Regards, Geo

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#2December 13th, 2005 · 05:24 PM
121 threads / 56 songs
3,098 posts
Netherlands
Very relaxed tune. Much "cleaner" than your other work. Much more generic also.

I really enjoy that bass line, the sound of the guitar is kind okay, and nicely played - very relaxed. Except that the drums - I don't like those typical cymbals, especially the splash one. So fake. That's then the only thing that gets away in the listening experience, I don't exactly know how you record, but if you have the ability to layer drum sounds, I suggest you do so. Or use some good compression / equalization on them, or perhaps even some mild modulation effects. I love the stereo spread in the drums though -

Well you know your way around a great many styles. I think that's great!
#3December 13th, 2005 · 06:41 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Thanks a lot, godd critique. Those cymbals are just cheap, but I thought it needs some.
Anyway, I was working on the drums for another song and will reconsider the cymbals
#4December 14th, 2005 · 02:26 PM
190 threads / 27 songs
2,845 posts
Germany
I think its a good tune. Structure is good even the idea. Sometimes a song needs vocals sometimes not. I am not sure what this song needs. Bass line is wonderful and rounds up to the guitar. The drums are very "clean" and need more expression. Humanize them a bit. Sound of solo guitar is great. All in all nice work.
#5December 16th, 2005 · 08:58 PM
77 threads / 59 songs
923 posts
Netherlands
Very good! I don't think it needs vocals, but for sure it could use a nice extra melody,which can be vocally. Good guitarplaying!
#6December 18th, 2005 · 10:24 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
11 posts
United States of America
I thought it was good. I liked it more toward the end. I thought something was going to happen (singing) maybe earlier. But toward the end it seemed to change more. I liked the guitar starting at 3:48 and the way it began to drop at 3:55. Maybe cut some of the front or move some of the elements from the end a little earlier. But it was good.
#7December 23rd, 2005 · 09:58 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
Sweden
Sounds a little bit like MIDI-music, but It's good.
#8December 24th, 2005 · 04:23 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
37 posts
Israel
liked that bass line!
#9January 14th, 2006 · 06:38 PM
3 posts
United States of America
its not really there
it okay just it is a bit on the slow side
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