A Song inspired by you guys her (esp. Puppet thx).
I'll rerecord it because the recording quality sucks. Just had some ideas in my head and I wanted them to turn into music as fast as possible..  So I post it here because I want to know what you think about this kind of stuff. 
I would be really happy if someone could give some hints regarding modulating frequencies on single Tracks (Bass, Lead Guitar, Vocals...)  Thanx

dude, I am deeply honoured! I am not worthy!

but wow, this is awesome! I can hear what you mean about the production quality, but this is a very atmospheric track already... this sounds like an early Clan of Xymox - even your voice - it's getting much better - I love that mantra-style lyric (repeating phrases)
ofcourse for the final version, you need to bring those up in the mix

very impressive, I knew you had it in you!!!

and thanks for your kind comments to my tracks ofcourse

A strong song! Yes the voice is too low in relation to the instruments

Great instrumental mix, nice composition, very brooding (as usual)   I think you might have panned the vox to the right a little too far. There is some distortion with the keys, did you compress them? Sometimes I find I have a tendency to compress too much and I have to be careful, I assume that's what you have done.
Yes, your voice is getting better, I think too. But it is a little low in the mix and as I said panned too much for my taste, but I think it fits this song. Your vox could also do with a little more production, like compressing,reverb and eq'ing.
Nice guitar work. Did you do all this yourself? Very decent song and production.

This is a pretty neat track - as creative says, very "brooding". 

Forgetting the mix (which is actually pretty good, considering you just wanted to get the musical ideas down!) I think there's a real market for the "slash-your-wrists" genre of music out there, which this track nicely falls into (I don't mean that in a bad way, and it's no criticism. 

Although this isn't the usual type of music that I listen to, I can still see myself getting melancholy with a couple of friends and a few beers with this playing in the background.

I'd like to hear it again when you've worked on the production a little.