I started writing/recording music on my laptop back in the spring (2005). This is one of the first songs I wrote and recorded. I recorded all of the instrumentation and vocals using click tracks. The drums are electronic and the strings came from my keyboard.

Hey, pretty cool song. The drums aren't bad for being programmed, however I would cut off a measure in the very beginning so the music comes in faster.
Nice guitar playing. Cool effects in panning. I like the vocal overlays after 3 minutes. Very mellow song with a nice groove.  Doesn't really sound like you're going to die, but whatever. I think I'll download this, I like it.

very relaxed laidback tune

nice use of effects, I really like those drum sounds, cool rhythm, makes me swing in my chair! yup... I downloaded this too...

looking forward to hear more of your work

OOH nice song. reminds me of some guys from Denmark "Laid back" with their song "Bakerman is baking bread..."
But I like it.

I almost opened a bottle of beer when I heard this song. It sounds relaxing and I really like it.

I really love this song aye. The guitar's fantastic. I agree with creative though. Come in earlier on those drums.

-  Chester

Chilled out to sheer F@&!. My stoner friends all agree .
I swear I've heard that rift before though. Can't really hear the vocals very well but it fits with the song. I think if you brought it forward it would ruin the melow feal of the song.

We're all just going to die anyway. This is what I've been saying for years

sweet song. i liked the feel of it.  keep going! 

wow. thanks everyone for the suggestions and comments. I agree, there's a lot that I still need to work on...

groovy man!
what software you use to record it?
nice use of effects from program

cool shit

I used GarageBand (on my mac)... I'm not quite serious enough to spend money on Logic Pro or any of those cool programs

cool song i loved it how did u thoight of this song.i am too trying too compose a song soon

Nothing to say but that it's just a damn good work!

...all the animals in the lab stopped bickering when they heard this....even went as far as to sugest that we should somehow get you over here to jam....what can i say.....are you free this weekend?
     Top Banana dear sir, Top Banana.....