I only have half this song. I was experimenting with backing vocals, only did half... and then lost the original :P Sorry folks!

VERSE 1

I am on fire.
With this red wall a-blazing,
the silver and the smoke.

A subtle gun fire.
In the distance is a sound,
In the cemetery fields.

CHORUS:

And I wanted to fall,
Long before this feeling came,
But it’s saved me on it’s own.

Adrenaline burns,
In the marrow of my bones,
In this suited lightweight skin.

VERSE 2:

Time and lavender sears.
And fills the air around,
I am anxious just to breathe it in.

Fine weather all around.
Cycles in my veins,
I’m this sympathetic stranger.

CHORUS:

- Chester

man, u really have a nice song in ur hands!!!
keep ok working on it, cus it's a really good tune. thwe backing voice is really good and everythin is good!! just finish it and i'll rate it with a 100%, cuz i know u'll make a good song out of this.

OK so I'm rating this 50% 'cos it's only 1/2 a song - just kiddin. I bet that the 2nd half was going to be as good as the first so there's your other 50.

lol, arro!
Sounds wonderful, can't wait to hear the rest.

See! More people voting on songs that aren't in the battle when they could be voting on my song that is! Haha I guess i need to read up on how this site works.

- Chester

dude hurry up and finish this song so I can hear the rest!

Haha it is finished, I just wanted to put up this one with the backing vocals. I long ago found the other half. It just doesn't have backing vocals.

- Chester

Dude, I want that song!
I'm sure you will kick and re-kick ass!

         > Iszil

u gotta find the other half!!!!!!

your voice box is made of gold >.< wheres the rest of it???????????????????????????????? gah! it should be made illigal to post only have finished songs! FINISH IT! or i will poke at you with spoons!! and throw paper airplanes at you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grr

holy! like the harmonies the beginning is kick ass. when 40 kicks in, welcome to my world. Good job so far happy trails to you. PS did you know I love your stuff?!!!???

You have an amazing talent
you are totally in tune with the music and the feel of it
keep it up and you are going to go places.

that is mint! that is my favourite type of music, and i think it is a really good song, i like the lyrics!                    

great stuff

Robbie.

Yea aint he just amazing!