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#1December 4th, 2005 · 01:41 AM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
Box Of Voices
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This song is not in a battle


Haven't posted anything for aaages. Thought I'd throw this out here. didn't play it all that well however, was a little hungover

VERSE:


Somewhere, deep beneath the ocean,

Lies this box of voices hiding,

Masked in, dust like sand storms underwater.


CHORUS:


It’s the words I cannot say,
When I need them most of all.

It’s the ones that cut so deep,
Are pressing on my walls.

Release this anchor, thank you,
For all you haven’t done.

I’ll be waiting when they come.


VERSE:


Tie me down a rock is nearby,

Vocal flood walls leave me dripping words out,

Of my mouth when I have so much built up.


- Chester

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#2December 4th, 2005 · 05:17 AM
29 threads / 14 songs
355 posts
Poland
i've mixed feelings about it - on one hand it is a beautiful song, really fanstastic. On the other, though, I have an impression I have heard the song somewhere before. MAYBE it's just because you come up with such memorable melodies that gives me such a feeling. Well, anyway, a very good job on the composition. I'd add some variation to the melody, as for any criticism.

Good luck to you
#3December 5th, 2005 · 11:21 AM
13 threads / 1 songs
408 posts
United States of America
OH YEA!
I'm soo glad you have posted again. Obligations is my fav song by far. I have it in my iPod, I put it on a cd of fav songs, and perserved all the id tags for you
This song is very lovely, you def have a wonderful way of writing lyrics. Probably sounds familiar to JBP bc it does have a familiar ring, but I think it suits this type of song well. You have a beautiful voice.
However, was that a cough I heard at 1:55? lol And what was that at 2:34? Man, recover, take some aspirins and cough drops before you record. ha,ha that's funny stuff.
And I thought your name was Travis O. from the ID tags, not Chester?
Anyway, I hope you'll upload some more songs soon.
#4December 5th, 2005 · 06:39 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
loved it man!!!!
i'm becoming a fan of u!!!
will download all ur music, to listen it in my music list.
nice voice, (again) and nice chords!
#5January 8th, 2006 · 09:30 PM
119 threads / 90 songs
258 posts
United Kingdom
Wow, really love the lyrics.
And the fluff up at the begining, haha.
Its beautiful 
#6January 8th, 2006 · 10:29 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
42 posts
Canada
Song
Excellent voice and nice song
#7February 2nd, 2006 · 06:47 PM
102 threads / 59 songs
204 posts
Canada
Good tune. Not really much I can say, I do agree with JBP it does remind me of something I've heard before Soul Asylum maybe, not a bad thing. Once again really good song, but I think you could do a lot more with it. Keep it up.
#8February 3rd, 2006 · 05:44 AM
3 posts
Australia
Really love to voice and lyrics but it does remind me of something to...have you posted it anywhere else on the net?....still great tune
#9September 27th, 2006 · 10:41 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
145 posts
United States of America
Extremely familiar, maybe because i've already listened to this song 10 or 15 times... hmph... well anyway, another great song from the almighty chester, i like how you mess up and don't bother to re-record it, seriously. 
#10September 28th, 2006 · 08:22 AM
24 threads
319 posts
Malaysia
nice man........

cool song...........

i mean reallly cool........

plus the lyrics are so nice...esp the intro...

 
#11September 28th, 2006 · 09:34 AM
1 threads / 1 songs
10 posts
United States of America
you already posted this one somewhere on here i think ... i just looked you up last night. just as good this time =P
#12November 9th, 2006 · 10:28 AM
31 posts
Canada
I really like the guitar in this song, it reminds allot of Elliott smith. Synchro between the rhythm and vocals are awesome. How can you make so many good songs?
#13November 9th, 2006 · 01:10 PM
3 threads / 3 songs
12 posts
Finland
=)
Beatiful quitar but it brings some other song to my mind, can´t recall which one, but still. I like your pure and innocent voice, fits this song perfectly
#14March 9th, 2008 · 12:23 PM
12 threads / 12 songs
89 posts
Canada
Box of Voices
Fantastic words Chester. My Lord, you leave a person pondering the words and the feelings of expression in this song. This one has a message for me too. You do have an ability to reach into what a person could be feeling. And at 46 myself, this IS a gift. Keep it coming man.........peace.....jgv
#15March 9th, 2008 · 01:57 PM
2 threads
49 posts
Ireland
Very tasty Ches - sweet voice - nice guitar - beautifully done M8!
Love it!

Btw, josephgvincent, 46? sure you're only a boy! I got some years on ya!
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