if i were you id enter it into the battle or otherwise no one will find it and listen to it.
nice ideas. i like the delay on the acoustic guitar. try composing the melody with more variety so it doesnt all move up and down the scale in step. also, try to make certain you know the scale inside out before you start playing. you seem a little unsure what notes you can and cant hit in places.
and im sorry, but i really didnt like the effected bit with all the distortion. its not "wrong" - thats just my opinion.
nice ideas. i like the delay on the acoustic guitar. try composing the melody with more variety so it doesnt all move up and down the scale in step. also, try to make certain you know the scale inside out before you start playing. you seem a little unsure what notes you can and cant hit in places.
and im sorry, but i really didnt like the effected bit with all the distortion. its not "wrong" - thats just my opinion.
have to agree with the scale point mate but definately worth an entry...really like the idea and the way it progresses
check out my tune - let there be life !!
check out my tune - let there be life !!
very weird... wow..... I feel Like I just came down from an acid trip.... Not that I do anything like that... umm..... errrr..... I tried it once in high school..... but... um.... I never, ummm.... well... yeah..... anyway...
Jim

Jim

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