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#1November 28th, 2005 · 05:58 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
11 times 8
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Song with guitar and computer in odd metrics.
Hope you'll enjoy it.
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#2November 28th, 2005 · 09:37 PM
8 threads / 7 songs
113 posts
Bangladesh
This is cool.. gotta love the use of an odd time signature. Personally wouldn't have done the whole song in 11/8, but it seems to work well anyway.  Nice work
#3November 29th, 2005 · 04:22 PM
8 threads / 4 songs
246 posts
United Kingdom
very cool idea, but it could do with more development.  it got a little dull towards the end which is i think what stavros was getting at.  good stuff tho.
#4November 29th, 2005 · 09:53 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
I agree, I shoulda played a solo with the guitar towards the end of the track. It woulda worked much more.
Thanks for the critiques!
#5December 4th, 2005 · 01:53 PM
160 threads / 88 songs
1,666 posts
United States of America
I agree, could use a bit more of something... but definetly cool......
                    Jim
#6December 7th, 2005 · 12:53 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
22 posts
Australia
cool for sure, people that have a go with different time signatures its cool shit.

feels like something is missing from the production but im sure its something you'll work out!

awesome!
#7December 8th, 2005 · 10:14 AM
66 threads / 55 songs
697 posts
United States of America
nice tune
it's catchy... midi incorporation is always fun. However, I agree, it sounds like something is missing. but maybe that's just me. keep it up.
#8December 8th, 2005 · 12:17 PM
1 posts
United Kingdom
Good ideas
Interesting use of 11/8 time and some good ideas on the bass. I think possibly the missing "something" other people have mentioned is just energy and a bit of dynamics in the performance. Really the only cure for this is to record it with live drums and mic'd up instruments. Not too shabby overall! 
#9December 9th, 2005 · 04:15 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
I liked it to a point, but just felt that it was leading on to something that wasn't there....
I wanted the track to break completely and lead into something else in 4/4.
#10December 9th, 2005 · 05:23 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
125 posts
Canada
tune
Good idea, just needs more...something...instruments, melody line, something to grab your interest. It sounds like a nature program track right now.

Ken
#11December 11th, 2005 · 10:31 AM
29 threads / 21 songs
75 posts
United Kingdom
that's a bit weird to hear shame it doesnt have a lead part... feels like it lacks a satch type thing over the top, nice chords though
#12December 24th, 2005 · 04:20 PM
13 threads / 12 songs
37 posts
Israel
try putting in lyrics....and maybe recording more warm instruments..it could work.
#13March 8th, 2006 · 08:51 PM
8 threads / 8 songs
54 posts
United States of America
11 times 8 , is tht mathrock? or some secret society song? 
#14March 8th, 2006 · 09:31 PM
106 threads / 63 songs
204 posts
Canada
The time signature is really interesting but the song drags on way too long without really changing. Cut down the intro and add some parts, a key change, minoire, lyrics, something. The rhythm is really interesting, maybe try some sort of rhythmic breakdown?
Otherwise good. What does 11 times 8 mean though?
#15March 13th, 2006 · 04:38 PM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
11 times 8 means 11 beats in one bar, 11/8.
Yes, music is ruled by mathematics.
and also a secret society.
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