very cool idea, but it could do with more development. it got a little dull towards the end which is i think what stavros was getting at. good stuff tho.
I agree, could use a bit more of something... but definetly cool......
Jim
Jim
nice tune |
it's catchy... midi incorporation is always fun. However, I agree, it sounds like something is missing. but maybe that's just me. keep it up.
Good ideas |
Interesting use of 11/8 time and some good ideas on the bass. I think possibly the missing "something" other people have mentioned is just energy and a bit of dynamics in the performance. Really the only cure for this is to record it with live drums and mic'd up instruments. Not too shabby overall!
11 times 8 , is tht mathrock? or some secret society song?
The time signature is really interesting but the song drags on way too long without really changing. Cut down the intro and add some parts, a key change, minoire, lyrics, something. The rhythm is really interesting, maybe try some sort of rhythmic breakdown?
Otherwise good. What does 11 times 8 mean though?
Otherwise good. What does 11 times 8 mean though?
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