I first recorded this rhytm to practise my solo skills, and once i decided to record solo guitare as well and it sounded nice, so now about half year later i run into this competition so i would like to know what do you think about this song.

well, your guitar sounds out of tune(could be effects or the two guitars aren't tuned together) too much distortion on the rhythm, the solo is lacking( I mean it doesn't go anywhere, no twists and turns no climax) This sounds like 2 guys jammin, some cool beats and rhythm throughout...