Well this is my first song on here so bare with me.  I have no equipment so the quality is crap.  I dedicate this song to my ex-girlfriend. Its screwed up at around a minute.  Tell me what you think. Try to enjoy   btw I'm only 15 so don't criticize too hard

not to bad at all, however, you really need to put some lyrics in there.  or solo over the song on yr guitar, improvise or come up with a catchy melody. it could be a really good song but at this point nothing happens in the song throughout.

Get some lyrics and make the song more meaningful.

good luck to you.
Jim

the fact that your 15 means nothing to me. it was considerate of you to share that about yourself though, on the outside chance that i cared