#1November 17th, 2005 · 10:40 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
7 posts
Australia
Flat tire
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This song is not in a battle


An ode to my car. just me and my guitar.

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#2November 24th, 2005 · 06:58 AM
21 threads / 21 songs
72 posts
Germany
Hehe nice work
Well I always like songs only with voice and guitar.  I found this very amusing, the guitar playing is good, maybe you should get some more depth behind the E-guitar. When it starts to get heavy, it needs more hmm don't know the right word, maybe more pressure. I like it as well how you modulate your voice, wish I could do that.  Overall hopes this helps you.
#3December 9th, 2005 · 06:38 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
It made me laugh, I can say that about it. 

Production wise - well......  and, hmmm not too sure about the vocals!  Keep on strumming though - it'll get there.
#4December 9th, 2005 · 07:22 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
United States of America
sounds like a killer song, need to work on the recording more
#5December 10th, 2005 · 02:58 AM
1 threads
7 posts
United States of America
the punching rythm is great .....
#6December 15th, 2005 · 12:02 PM
96 posts
United States of America
heres a little critique
Your nice and fast on the leads - and it has a good tune. It is definatly to short , there should be more. the recording quality is low, but i am sure your aware of that.
good lyrics - overall nice job ---  B+

singing : 4.5
originality : 3.5
guitar tech : 4.9
recording quality : 2
overall : 3.75
#7December 23rd, 2005 · 11:01 AM
3 threads / 3 songs
9 posts
Canada
i love those spur of the moment songs!  Rockin!  Those funny songs don't have to be too long though.. i think its just right in length.
#8December 29th, 2005 · 02:10 PM
28 threads / 19 songs
175 posts
United States of America
what equipment do you use?

it seems to be decent... but the singing is a little uncontrolled... not in a good way.

anyway, the lead was good, but the strumming really needed work. I can relate to that... can play a solo, but not an acoustic rythm... anyway, keep at it.
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