#1November 5th, 2005 · 06:16 AM
29 threads / 21 songs
75 posts
United Kingdom

This song is not in a battle

most recent, hope ya like it

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#2November 5th, 2005 · 01:31 PM
187 threads / 27 songs
2,802 posts
It is a wonderful song. But your voice is too loud, you want more as you can. Sometimes its not good when you put so many voices together. Use some effects, limiter or stuff and please stay in tune. A really fine guitar solo but too loud. At 4:40 the song becomes really wonderful at last except at 5:06. The chords are out of tune there. But this is only my opinion. You are great talented. I like your songs.
#3November 5th, 2005 · 02:03 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
what can i say!... just that ur song is great, beautiful, wonderful, lovely, reflexive, intense, sensible... a pretty pretty song.
of course has some techinics problems, but just details, cuz the overall of the song is really really good; liked the chord progressions, the voices harmonies, the guitar solo, and the last part. the voice is loud, the solo, as well, the harmonies without a effect to compact them, but this details dont influences in the musical feelling of the song, which is lovely.
if u could see me u'd see that i'm smiling and enjoyng ur song.
that's all, and bye, and congratulations.

PS: with a studio work it'd be a hit, i sware it!!!
#4November 5th, 2005 · 02:31 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,541 posts
i forgot! can u post the lyrics, so then i can make a karaoke wile i'm in the computer????
#5November 6th, 2005 · 10:16 AM
3 threads / 1 songs
7 posts
United States of America
This is a good song and the message is very powerful.
#6November 7th, 2005 · 03:48 AM
4 threads / 4 songs
15 posts
United States of America
Well, what's been said I agree with - The acoustic guitar part is v. nice and needs to be louder relative to the vox and electric solo. The lyrical/melodic hook is quite strong, and this will be more apparent once the mix is not so distracting. Keep it up!
#7November 8th, 2005 · 02:26 PM
13 threads / 1 songs
408 posts
United States of America
The first time I've noticed the guitar work you do... Very nice!
You should think about sending your raw recordings to DaveUK, when he gets back. He'd be the guy to trust with your mixing. He'd do a great job and you could lay it on a cd and sell, sell, sell. I know you're young, but you should try everything you can to do what you want #1 bc you are young and #2 bc you have IT.
This is a great song, keep them coming.
#8November 11th, 2005 · 07:28 AM
117 threads / 88 songs
256 posts
United Kingdom
Its a gorgeous song.

I agree with the coments about mixing though.
#9November 11th, 2005 · 02:16 PM
29 threads / 21 songs
75 posts
United Kingdom
Its over now just look on the bright side
Be afraid but donít be so tied down
Hereís the  rest, your ticket for the ride
Get out of here, youíve got all you can from this town

Nothings left for you to decide
You donít know what its like to have tried
All your life
All your life
You have lied

Donít drive too fast
Some things wont last
Wherever you go
Donít chew on the same bone
You donít have to go home
Because sometimes you gotta run

Knock on the door of one of your old friends
Whoís always there, whenever you need him
Tell the truth hereís where the lie ends
He understands but the future is still grim
#10November 12th, 2005 · 11:16 AM
15 threads / 14 songs
56 posts
nice song, but there's some sound problems. Vox are too high.
#11May 25th, 2006 · 01:15 PM
157 threads / 30 songs
1,953 posts
United States of America
again i love your songs
Production stuff is what it is, mixes, levels, can all be fixed. I think your awsome, just for the fact that your song writing skills are above the normal stuff, and your what sixteen? Amazing.  The chord progressions and chord choices are very very very good. your voice is nice for this style. Do you do the lead guitar stuff?
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