most recent, hope ya like it

It is a wonderful song. But your voice is too loud, you want more as you can. Sometimes its not good when you put so many voices together. Use some effects, limiter or stuff and please stay in tune. A really fine guitar solo but too loud. At 4:40 the song becomes really wonderful at last except at 5:06. The chords are out of tune there. But this is only my opinion. You are great talented. I like your songs.

what can i say!... just that ur song is great, beautiful, wonderful, lovely, reflexive, intense, sensible... a pretty pretty song.
of course has some techinics problems, but just details, cuz the overall of the song is really really good; liked the chord progressions, the voices harmonies, the guitar solo, and the last part. the voice is loud, the solo, as well, the harmonies without a effect to compact them, but this details dont influences in the musical feelling of the song, which is lovely.
if u could see me u'd see that i'm smiling and enjoyng ur song.
that's all, and bye, and congratulations.

PS: with a studio work it'd be a hit, i sware it!!!

i forgot! can u post the lyrics, so then i can make a karaoke wile i'm in the computer????
lol

This is a good song and the message is very powerful.

Well, what's been said I agree with - The acoustic guitar part is v. nice and needs to be louder relative to the vox and electric solo. The lyrical/melodic hook is quite strong, and this will be more apparent once the mix is not so distracting. Keep it up!

The first time I've noticed the guitar work you do... Very nice!
You should think about sending your raw recordings to DaveUK, when he gets back. He'd be the guy to trust with your mixing. He'd do a great job and you could lay it on a cd and sell, sell, sell. I know you're young, but you should try everything you can to do what you want #1 bc you are young and #2 bc you have IT.
This is a great song, keep them coming.

Its a gorgeous song.
 

I agree with the coments about mixing though.

Its over now just look on the bright side
Be afraid but don’t be so tied down
Here’s the  rest, your ticket for the ride
Get out of here, you’ve got all you can from this town

Nothings left for you to decide
You don’t know what its like to have tried
All your life
All your life
You have lied

Don’t drive too fast
Some things wont last
Forever
Wherever you go
Don’t chew on the same bone
You don’t have to go home
Because sometimes you gotta run

Knock on the door of one of your old friends
Who’s always there, whenever you need him
Tell the truth here’s where the lie ends
He understands but the future is still grim

nice song, but there's some sound problems. Vox are too high.

Production stuff is what it is, mixes, levels, can all be fixed. I think your awsome, just for the fact that your song writing skills are above the normal stuff, and your what sixteen? Amazing.  The chord progressions and chord choices are very very very good. your voice is nice for this style. Do you do the lead guitar stuff?