I don't know exactly what I was thinking when I wrote this and I don't care if it sounds like crap.  I have way to many songs in line and at the rate I am going I will be the only person to have heard them.

well... i cant say i didnt like it, after all, i listened to the whole thing, despite the quality.
also, funny songs are always welcome!

Kinda funny. I really like the deep baritone voice there. Best part of the song, wouldn't mind to hear it recorded a bit better. The song would be better in my opinion if the humor was just a bit more acerbic, a bit more quick-witted if you get my drift.

RJ

I like it too, it reminds me of beatles' nowhere man, but more by the atmosphere than the music i suppose. i can clearly imagine a children choir in the background, that would make it funnier, and, if i undrstood the lyrics properly, it is kinda fairy-tale anyway.

Haha!
Reminds me at "My car is fast, my teeth are shiny......"
What happened to the sound? Its phasing. But nice job though.

it wasn't bad. just unusual

Not bad, gives me that whole telling the story round the campfire feeling. Cool.

kinda cool.  i look forward to hearing your other stuff.

...and songs in their raw form are always great. Your strength is obviously songwriting, team up with some musicians and you may comeup with some good stuff.