This is a first pre-release of an industrial rock song I wrote. Guitars, drums and bass are replaced with synthesisers. I need to correct a lot of things and add some vocals, but unfortunately I ran out of time. I just wanted to share this tune and I hope that after several weeks I'll record the real, live version with my friends.

Here are the lyrics:

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The Beautiful View Of Unwanted Death

people go to the mountains
to look from the above
green and white bright patterns
act like a grandma's wrap

people fall from the mountains
and lay swallowing dirt
the nature of sinus says:
"Everybody will fall."

I was misinformed that world is perfect
Now I know the truth and I burn the flag
2x

the beautiful view of unwanted death 2x
once you get high
some day you will die
you'll fall down so fast
like a leaden snowflake

I remember my great love
to a pink-colored toy
she would die for the money
so she killed me and left

once they get what they wanted
all the pictures of you
they'll find a better model
you will become useless

the beautiful view of unwanted death 2x
once you get high
some day you will die
you will fall down so fast
like a leaden snowflake

I was misinformed that world is perfect
Now I know the truth and I burn the flag
2x

children are so beautiful
with all of their sweet dreams
no need to think about ends
life is a beautiful view

when a boy shoots his brother
with a stick as the gun
they just all laugh together
even flies are happy

so we sing:
"the march of death into the sky so high
who has stolen the ladder of Jacob
which dandy decided to stay?
which dandy decided to pay?"
2x

the beautiful view of unwanted death 2x
I play myself to get into heaven
2x
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Interesting. Are you going to keep some of the synths, and double them with the guitars, drums and bass? That'll be really cool.

It's pretty cool... want to hear the finished version.

I really like the chord progression, I lood forward to hearing the finished version, hope you'll post it.

i agree with puppetXeno, keeping a keyboard part would be pretty sweet. of course, you've got some bass and guitar tracks to law down.

this song would be very nice in it's finished form- dont think it's a sin to upload a new version!

Yeah, I'll leave some synths and probably add new. This song is ment to be industrial

At the moment it sounds like the soundtrack to some game on the Megadrive. It's a little hard to envisage how this track will end up. Good luck to you!

This tune lacks something...i don't know what....maybe those live instruments. Some nice rocking guitars will be great!!!! Oh yeah, bass must be changed!!! Sounds like oldschool computer game )

P.S. Thanx for nice review for my song. I't was realy awsome to read those lines