oopsie dasiyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Pretty cool....  Timing seems off a bit in the early part of the song, but progresses nicely... Although the distorted bit at the end is a it much... sounds more like a recording problem though... but otherwise, real nice.....
           Jim

nice rythem - great melody. I would like to hear some lyrics and mayby some rythem. iduno though, thats just what i desire, its not a con to this work. In my opinion, music is left to the creator.

guitar tech : 4
originality : 3.5
composition : 4
overall : 4
B+ good job

I like the chords you are using, they are nice and happy.  The song itself has a decent structure that flows well and as others have said this could be enhanced with the addition of some vocals. The lead line is ok as it suits the style but could do with some polishing up. Its a shame about the recording quality but I guess its the ideas behind it that counts. Keep it up dude.

vocals would be nice...

It would be nice if it weren't overloaded...damn shame --the guitar work is really go t a nice feel, but it's so distorted, I honestly can't listen to it at all...

nice song...