There are days I feel alone, there are tears I couldn't hide... and so on. I would greatly appreciate if you could give me some feedback on the tune as I can't say anything objective aobut it cause I've listened to it too many times. One of my friends did the solo, the rest is by me.

Great work,man,that's a absolutely a good song!

nice song mate, best song ive heard on here so far

Great job again! My opinion is to experiment with different synth sounds, bc I think the one towards the end doesn't fit in, or maybe just bringing it down in the mix. But either way, awesome song and great lyrics!

Hey Jim

You did it again. I love your weired chords. Again great effects on the guitar and a wonderful simple synth. Great!

hey its not my thing... but for a blues/ popish  sounding song its cool

Cool song! Man, your getting some great sounds there from all of your instruments. Keep up the good work!

That's some good synth, but you've already been told that.
Some of your vocals remind me of The Beatels, some of Pinkfloyed. I liked it, all instruments were used well and the sound came together well.

Another great job. I like the way the melody doesn't go where you expect. Interesting comparisons from Moses (above) which I have to agree with (assuming that's The Beatles & Pink Floyd). How good a compliment is that !!!

very nice song

the only constructive criticism is that the drums are a little bit lost in the mix - i'd really like to have those cymbals "right there" if you know what i mean...

actually i think the synth sound fits very well - i quite like it - though i think that synth solo should get a little more time, either give it one short lick or let it solo for about twice as long (which is not long anyway since the current solo is short)

i think the contrast between the distortion types is a little confusing and i'm not sure how to remedy that... the distortion seems a little bit "fuzzy" overall, which is not a bad thing but the rest of the song is very crisp and clear like the drums and the vocals and bass, and so the that fuzzy type of distortion that gets used should maybe be switched to a crisper thicker crunchy kind of distortion... not sure if that explains it well enough but that's what i'd like to hear... and maybe put some background synths doubling the chords to add texture and depth like maybe some strings or just anything that fits and meshes in right...

for being not an american you've sure got a good accent and you say/sing your english lyrics very well

welllll....I liked it   Guitar FX were nice. It was something like tremmelo. And the solo on the acustic guitar is great. You have a nice friend guitarist 

  Well, thank you. I'm glad you liked my guitar style.

Thanks Eth - I know what you mean about the distortion. However, I was trying more to build a kind of a wall of sound than to give the song crispiness. Anyway, I appreciate all the comments. If I'm rerecording this tune I'll surely take it into consideration.

Jim

This is great track, tremolo effect goes excellent with this tune. Great job on the mixing too.

this good.definately.

is it my gear maybe that i think there is too much bass/lo freq. ?
thought that could be also why the drums sounds so far away.
But again great work!
some of your work do remind me of the album 'damnation' from Opeth, which i liked a lot too(it is their only album I like, the rest is too much for me) But you have defenitly also your own character, i mean , it is not that i think you sound just like them