"A Room of Four Cement Walls" by The Tremulance

very good

Excellent!

Bands like The Postal Service have proved that songs in this vein can still have lyrics. I like this track but feel it suffers greatly from the lack of lyrics.

Great stuff.

Is that a midi oboe? They sound very nice and add depth. Everything sounds very well mixed and I like the panning effects. The cymbals towards the end are a little too loud, IMO. I like the ending, though.

It does seem to be lacking without lyrics. Almost sounds like classic super Nintendo gaming music.

Whoah, second postal service-esque song I heard in a row (though very different from one another at the same time).  But definatley I think some...easy (maybe wrong word to describe them?) lyrics would really take this piece to the next level.  Still trying to imagine this with a very simple bass line in places...can't decide whether it would make or break it.  Agreeing with creativecontrol on the cymbals being too loud at the end, so just drop them down a little.

Overall, im really enjoying this.  Be sure to post again if you get some lyrics recorded!!!

Kobeshi

I'm not really qualified to review this genre of music, but from my judgement, it's pretty good . . . is that midi violin in the background? I think perhaps using an orchestra tone would work better, but maybe I just listen to too much hip-hop. Wait-no I don't, I listen to rock

Either way, keep it up! I hope to hear more from talented artists.

even with the lack of lyrics this song is amazing, def try to mess around with some vocal tracks or get someone to do it because this could be even more amazing than it already is, which is very good.


great job

I like how it kinda bounces around in your head, it has texture to the sound.
I do think it could benefit from vocals, but, it also would be great alongside some really tripped out video. It tells an interesting story. I like the build as well.

It makes me feel sad and reminiscent of happier days.
I love it!!

do you wanna be right
do you wanna be wrong
take my hand hand this wont take long.
come with me lets set the world free.    Those words popped in my head when i started to listen to this, I dig.