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"from the encyclopedia for post modern teens"

sorry i didnt do a steve vai rip off guys, and by the way im one of those little shits that say "by the way im only 16, so that makes me better"

lol, i'm also one of those who says is 16 (my case, now 17) but i doesnt matter...
must say it sound really awful!!! really bad cound quality, but liked the chords progression, and the execution is good... the beginning reminded me the album Thik as a Brick, from Jethro Tull, specially the homonimus song.
summarising, good execution, good chords progression but a %$&$#$ soud quality

nice progression

another god one (still loud)

I like the acoustic sound. It's sounds similar to stuff I write. I'm 16...and I will be saying "I'm better cs I'm only 16"aswell.....cs I want special treatment.
So anyway good song.

it's definitely unique

Good song nice acoustic sound

nice tone from the acoustic, a little loud, but that can be changed easily.

dayum! wish i could play like u.... 

For 16, its great, would love to hear you maybe lay some lead tracks on this and mix it down, that would make this piece even better. Keep at it, Steve Vai anit got nothin on you.

nice ideas and good playing but somehow you need to get the guitar sounding a lot less clicky.  either move the mic away or use a softer plectrum.  the sound quality ruins what could otherwise have been a really nice piece.

and i applaud you for not feeling the need to drag out this one musical idea to be 3 and a half hours long (like most instrumental composers on this site seem to).  Its short and to the point - good work.

Actually, you may want to try a stiffer plectrum say a 1.14 mm that will help alot with the sound of the guitar.. what is happening is the pick your using is too thin, and is bending, and then flicking off the first sting causing it to be really flicky sounding.. also , move the mic back away from the guitar.. then, adjust the levels with the software... otherwise, it sounds great...

I wonder, who are you referring to with the sarcastic Steve Vai comment?