This is a soft track , sounds like a bit country style but its all good..
Comments And Suggestions are always welcome....
and yah...im still 15

Cool stuff. Great job I didn't expect the electric guitar to kick in, very tight effect. Any lyrics?, not that I think it needs some, but just that it sounds lyric oriented and structured.

you're still fifteen? get on my tip right this instant

Yeah, This is cool. I like the way you overlap the guitars.
I think it would be better with some vocals though, it seems that somethings missing without them.

good overlap

Wow, I wish I had that kinda talent when I was 15, well, i probably did but I had one beat up tape deck that played Michael Jacksons thriller and a 3rd world 2 string guitar, cant blame me, I was a broke 80's kid, lol. Great job bro, a bit repetitive but I still love it, especially the part that goes from the chill riff to the metal riff (wow). Good stuff. Dont be afraid of out of your comfort zone, you'll be surprised at the stuff you'll come out with.

Nice dude. You could add melody without lyrics, if you wish, maybe with an additional guitar during the acoustic part.

RJ

wow....is this real or made on PC? If it is sinthetic it's really real sounding, except the guitar, it sounds kinda strange 

this is a great arrangement.... I agree it needs lyrics... And wow.. what a great break in with the electric... great timing.... 15.. geesh... I feel so old...
I wish I would have actually learned to play when I was 15 instead of  always being the sound guy... sigh..... oh well.... live and learn....
      Jim

I disagree, this song is fine for me without lyrics. It takes talent to keep people intgerested throughout an entire song without any lyrics, but you've  done it. congrats.

It's really chilling, good break in with the electric. Great timing, although the acoustics sound like a loop, aren't they?
I wonder how could you manage to get over 2000 views, draft of envy..he

Not bad at all! I think i expected the heavier part a little sonner, but that's just me...

wow! you really play well for a 15 yr old.. song reminds me a bit of Vai's 'burning down the mountain'.. now how about a solo somewhere?

dude u da man! great song ... love the soft part ... i agree wit SlayerofmaN, the left out void between the last crash of the clean part and the heavy part can be filled up by pulling up the heavy part to about 2/8th. Rest everything shouldnt even be touched, its so damn perfect ... keep rockin'
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I love this track.