This Song is from my band Qol.  It is our first song actually recorded.  I play the lead guitar and the rhythm guitar for the chorus.  There is another 40 seconds to the song but I could not make it fit. The song was done over a long time and was made on my band member’s computer.  Email me what you think.  thanx hope you enjoy.

Awesome song.  Very well written.  Your voice is great.  I like that there are changes in intensity in the different parts of the song but retains an overall flow.  I would love to hear a better recording.  Your voice does not need a lot of effects or support around it.  I think if you were left acapella at one of the transition points and then the instruments  came back in with you that it would be cool.  I kept wanting  to hear your vocals more clearly.  In other words according to my whacked out viewpoint you have a killer voice don't let the music get too busy around it.  Rock on !

I agree with Newbreed. The vocal effects are unecessary but the vocal needs to brought forward in the mix particularily when the band kick in. Otherwise,  it's a great song and well performed!