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#1September 14th, 2005 · 10:01 AM
6 threads / 5 songs
43 posts
Venezuela
Sea of Tranquility
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This song try to takes you to a peaceful place. It's an instrumental rock song.I've made some adjustments (one and other detail) and now its finished.


I hope you like it.

Plz don't forget to put any comments or suggestions
Thanks for listening my song.

"a sunset on the seashore..."


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#2September 14th, 2005 · 02:00 PM
7 threads
104 posts
United Kingdom
Very relaxing - this is the first of your songs I have listened to & I like your style. Have heard endless guitar instrumentals which bore me to death but this wasn't one of them.
#3September 14th, 2005 · 03:05 PM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
Nice relaxing track, pretty decent guitar tone and mixing, with some pleasant melodic playing. Would really be nice to expand a little on the improv and have a bit more 'virtuoso' in there, rather than than pure melody - I'm sure you can do it because you already have a comfortable ability with the scales you are using.

Sweep picking, pinched/tapped/natural harmonics, the odd finger tap - just something to give that little extra 'flair' in the spirit of Vai that I think would suit this. Overall though, the playing is top notch but it just seems like you are not quite letting go...
#4October 14th, 2005 · 06:31 PM
15 threads / 15 songs
106 posts
United States of America
Peace
I agree with DaveUK. Dont hold back there. Put in some of that feeling. Overall, great song. I like it.
#5October 15th, 2005 · 10:22 AM
37 threads / 25 songs
237 posts
United States of America
enjoyed it...very nice....post more
#6October 23rd, 2005 · 07:02 PM
2 posts
United States of America
Awesome stuff
#7November 25th, 2005 · 02:43 PM
117 threads / 55 songs
1,540 posts
Chile
buena kncion, lco!!!
me gusto ese sonido cm ambiental, muy Satriani, o Vai, aunq no soi fanatico d ellos, pero el exo d q alguin cm tu haya exo eso ta bn. me gusto al progresion d los acorder... t recomendaria, cm dijo DaveUK q improvisaras +; puedes tener una melodia, pero dart unos 30 segundos para hacer un solo en q ocuper escalas y pentatonicas bn jugadas, y cn velocidad, cn + feeling rockero. pero en general me gusto arto tu kncion, d exo, la baje pa escucharla en mi lista d musik y la vote tmb.
sigue cn este estilo, ta muy weno.
#8November 25th, 2005 · 04:38 PM
8 threads / 7 songs
113 posts
Bangladesh
Very nice tune! The song has a good structure that works well here, gives the impression that you are setting out on a journey and following it through. Very reminiscent of the great Satch ballad style.

Your sounds are quite nice and mellow, nice soft drum sounds, however I think the lead guitar sound is a little bit fuzzy and needs a bit more of a "bite" to it. I've found often a good first point of call is to believe it or not back off the gain a little on the distortion and fiddle with the eq a bit. As a guitarist I know, it almost  kills ya to do it, well it does for me anyway. So what you get out of doing that is a more natural sounding tone, with a bit more sustain and a bit of a rough edge to it which I think would really suit this song.

Overall, great job!
#9December 3rd, 2005 · 10:29 PM
4 threads / 4 songs
7 posts
United States of America
mmmmmm. makes me sleepy, it must be naptime... Keep up the good work, i actually like this track.
#10December 3rd, 2005 · 11:23 PM
42 threads / 1 songs
556 posts
United States of America
Very nice, relaxing sound
#11December 5th, 2005 · 08:38 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
Sounds really early 90s. Very professional.
#12December 9th, 2005 · 04:22 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
Great backing sound to a nice bit of melodic lead.  I very much agree with DaveUK, it's lacking a bit of variety in the guitar sound.
Still a good track though!
#13December 9th, 2005 · 11:44 AM
6 threads / 5 songs
43 posts
Venezuela
Thanks to all
I really appreciate all your comments...its true, i have to put more improvisation in my track...but the meaning of the song is other than show my abilities...its a relaxing track...anyway, thanks to all of you...i'll see what i can do...
#14December 10th, 2005 · 04:57 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
125 posts
Canada
tune
This is something that should be on the radio. Why don't they play good musicians,rather than just singers? I know.. they can't relate. Bravo!
#15December 12th, 2005 · 04:26 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
125 posts
Canada
Song
This is terrific! You sound like the type of guitarist to collaborate with.
Keep up the tasty recordings.
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