Sea of Tranquility |
This song try to takes you to a peaceful place. It's an instrumental rock song.I've made some adjustments (one and other detail) and now its finished.
I hope you like it.
Plz don't forget to put any comments or suggestions
Thanks for listening my song.
"a sunset on the seashore..."
I hope you like it.
Plz don't forget to put any comments or suggestions
Thanks for listening my song.
"a sunset on the seashore..."
Nice relaxing track, pretty decent guitar tone and mixing, with some pleasant melodic playing. Would really be nice to expand a little on the improv and have a bit more 'virtuoso' in there, rather than than pure melody - I'm sure you can do it because you already have a comfortable ability with the scales you are using.
Sweep picking, pinched/tapped/natural harmonics, the odd finger tap - just something to give that little extra 'flair' in the spirit of Vai that I think would suit this. Overall though, the playing is top notch but it just seems like you are not quite letting go...
Sweep picking, pinched/tapped/natural harmonics, the odd finger tap - just something to give that little extra 'flair' in the spirit of Vai that I think would suit this. Overall though, the playing is top notch but it just seems like you are not quite letting go...
Peace |
I agree with DaveUK. Dont hold back there. Put in some of that feeling. Overall, great song. I like it.
buena kncion, lco!!!
me gusto ese sonido cm ambiental, muy Satriani, o Vai, aunq no soi fanatico d ellos, pero el exo d q alguin cm tu haya exo eso ta bn. me gusto al progresion d los acorder... t recomendaria, cm dijo DaveUK q improvisaras +; puedes tener una melodia, pero dart unos 30 segundos para hacer un solo en q ocuper escalas y pentatonicas bn jugadas, y cn velocidad, cn + feeling rockero. pero en general me gusto arto tu kncion, d exo, la baje pa escucharla en mi lista d musik y la vote tmb.
sigue cn este estilo, ta muy weno.
me gusto ese sonido cm ambiental, muy Satriani, o Vai, aunq no soi fanatico d ellos, pero el exo d q alguin cm tu haya exo eso ta bn. me gusto al progresion d los acorder... t recomendaria, cm dijo DaveUK q improvisaras +; puedes tener una melodia, pero dart unos 30 segundos para hacer un solo en q ocuper escalas y pentatonicas bn jugadas, y cn velocidad, cn + feeling rockero. pero en general me gusto arto tu kncion, d exo, la baje pa escucharla en mi lista d musik y la vote tmb.
sigue cn este estilo, ta muy weno.
Very nice tune! The song has a good structure that works well here, gives the impression that you are setting out on a journey and following it through. Very reminiscent of the great Satch ballad style.
Your sounds are quite nice and mellow, nice soft drum sounds, however I think the lead guitar sound is a little bit fuzzy and needs a bit more of a "bite" to it. I've found often a good first point of call is to believe it or not back off the gain a little on the distortion and fiddle with the eq a bit. As a guitarist I know, it almost kills ya to do it, well it does for me anyway. So what you get out of doing that is a more natural sounding tone, with a bit more sustain and a bit of a rough edge to it which I think would really suit this song.
Overall, great job!
Your sounds are quite nice and mellow, nice soft drum sounds, however I think the lead guitar sound is a little bit fuzzy and needs a bit more of a "bite" to it. I've found often a good first point of call is to believe it or not back off the gain a little on the distortion and fiddle with the eq a bit. As a guitarist I know, it almost kills ya to do it, well it does for me anyway. So what you get out of doing that is a more natural sounding tone, with a bit more sustain and a bit of a rough edge to it which I think would really suit this song.
Overall, great job!
mmmmmm. makes me sleepy, it must be naptime... Keep up the good work, i actually like this track.
Sounds really early 90s. Very professional.
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