this is a metal song i wrote some months ago.

This is badass. Tone fits well and the playing is nice and tight rhythmically. The change around 35s sounds pretty hot, some nice bassy rumblings happening there.

Critique:

Not so keen on the riff at 1m13s.
A few minor timing errors in the playing - but these are only noticable because the rest is so tight.
I woulda liked a badass solo.
You have some annoying mains hum going on there, audible at the end.
Guitar is too boomy and lacks clarity.
Needs a good mastering to do it justice.



Anyway, great stuff man and I'd like to hear more!

more metal tune's always a joy to here when done well.
good job on the song,needs a little better  mix at the end on guitar.