AIN'T MUCH OF NOTHIN' BUT ME GETTIN' MAUDLIN, WAITING FOR SOME RAIN.  I DO ALL THE INSTRUMENTALS.

I really like the composition, yet its lacking something, more of a beat presence or maybe a little Eq work, but hell maybe im just really picky, great job man.

yeah, needs something... i can hear about three things that's it

drums... chordal bass and pads

there are obviously a few more parts than this, but the arrangement makes it feel like there's basically three things going on... and really actually seems like only two... all the pads blend together and all the chord/beat blends together too much...

whatever

not much there IMO... add some distinct parts like separate out a distinct bass line and make it a little different from the beat and the chords... and separate the pads and the melody and add some hi-hat work on the beat... and that'll make it more of a real song... then again maybe I don't know anything about techno

keep it up man! i can tell you like playin this stuff - keep recording

I thought it was good... but like everyone else said, maybe it is missing something. I liked how it changed more toward the end, around the 4:50 area. Possibly play that earlier in the song like a chorus.

good keys tone's, song little long keep down to 3 min. good work