This song is instrumental, recorded with a minidisc.

May be sound repetitive but i was improvising on the scale.

I hope your comments

greetings from Mexico

It does sound a bit repetitive BUT I really love the emotional pull it gives off with the change in the scale, I think you need to work in another guitar

Did you know that this song was only played once? I know that because I played in it. We should record it again, partner.
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I'm sorry it sounds pretty horrible to me. Guitar work is fine, though, composition is sound but nothing remarkable.

Hey dude before you start recording just TuNE THE GuITAR...sounds like an old gramophone record...

hmm... tuning sounds fine to me, but the quality isn't so good. You said this was your first song? Then that's understandable.

As for the song, it's very nice. Very melodic... and dark. I'd really like to hear a better quality version, but this will do for now

Yes, it does get a little repetitive, but... who cares.

nice work.
(to micosis also)

Ok , i think it could be great , without the horrible background noise , and a little work to make the melody clean also , for me , there is a good feeling in this melody , and sometime great melodies come out improvisation

oye esta muy bien pero se tiene que mejorar el fondo, hay mucha interferencia, pero se escucha muy interesante

It's a nice song but like nemo said the background noise has to go somehow, very nice