silly song i was messing with the other day.  i still need more words and a melody for the verse. excuse the cheesy keyboard part. im not that great on keys.

I like your voice, it's deep and breathy, but it was too low.

mm..

i don't like the completely overused high-hat smacking on that drum.  it drives me NUTS!  i didn't mind the song other than that!  i agree, maybe a bit more volume to the vocal.  i get the impression it's supposed to be softer, but still.

i liked the finish too