these sounds all blend really well with each other. i like the constant flow, especially with that guitar interlude about half way through the mix.
i think it would be lots cooler if there was some sudden tempo and key change after that interlude though, and turned it into a completely different beat. as much as i like the flow of the whole thing, it doesn't ever ... really go anywhere. you could also give the vocal more strength and pitch variation during a chorus. as is, the changes aren't very noticeable.
still good though!
i think it would be lots cooler if there was some sudden tempo and key change after that interlude though, and turned it into a completely different beat. as much as i like the flow of the whole thing, it doesn't ever ... really go anywhere. you could also give the vocal more strength and pitch variation during a chorus. as is, the changes aren't very noticeable.
still good though!
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great song grrrrrrrreaaat
nice idea - a little repeative but it makes for great background music. some more strength and emotion in the vocal would really boost this composition. the singer almost sounds a little ... well ... not-bothered about it! especially words like "deep in her heart she doesnt really care for you" need a lot more emotion. i mean - if you just read those words without hearing the song, its heart-wrenching, yet the singer doesnt sound particularly fussed!
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