This is my first song that i'll be posting. I just recorded this in my room with a standard computer mic. The guitar isn't too flash since i just invented the chord progression and lyrics and sung to it.

Tell me what you guys think! Thanks in advance

-Swarm

nice and cool 

that's a really good sound you got for a standard computer mic ! 

Guitar is fine... plenty more than adequate!. Voice is great. lovely song

You have a very nice tone to your voice, vocals were a tiny bit shakey in places but on the whole very good. A little bit of auto-tune would help tighten up the odd flat note. The understated guitar is nice too - some drums, strings etc would fit this nicely to add some more dynamics in places...but then it is great acoustic!

Sounds surprisingly nice for a simple mic I'd love to hear what you could do with some better equipment and more ambitious production.

Great track, and I look forward to hearing more.

The songs ok. The voice is awesome. I can't believe it is a standard comp mike. But somehow the song dind't make me feel listen to it again. Lacks power.

Thanks for the feedback dudes. A mate and i have invented a new song, we'll be recording it. It'll be alot better than this. Thanks again guys

i really do like.a bit predictable but good godo good.
nice one
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