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#1August 25th, 2005 · 08:10 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
76 posts
Indonesia
Adhere To Love
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I used Indonesian Lyrics in this song...and my friend adds the drums...hope you'll like it...=)

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#2August 26th, 2005 · 06:48 AM
117 threads / 20 songs
1,422 posts
United States of America
awesome!  i love the melody.  it's soo good.

the drum-work is good too.

you voice is great.  very strong sounding, yet not over-powering

i can't understand the lyrics obviously, being that they're in indonesian, but hey   i really like this one.  i had no idea what to expect, but it's wonderful!

very good job.  the chorus is especially cool, i think.

you've got talent, man.  you've got it 
#3August 26th, 2005 · 07:52 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
76 posts
Indonesia
The lyrics
Glad you like it dude! I think music is a universal language and it doesn't matter what language we're talkin...it's all bout music! hehe...

OK, I'll explain you lil bit bout this song. The title it self "Adhere To Love" i think already gives you a clue bout what this song is all about. And the lyrics, ok I'll try to translate it into english so maybe it will help you to more understand bout this song and get in to it.  

Masih kuingat                      (I still remember)
Awal kita bertemu           (The first time we met)
Kita saling berpandang           (We are looking at eachother)
Kaupun tersenyum malu           (And you're smiling shame)

Terasa bahagia hatiku           (My heart feels so happy)
Kuingin selalu bersama dirimu       (I want to be with you forever)

              
Aku                       (I)
Membutuhkanmu                (Need you)
Setiap waktu               (Everytime)
Dalam hidupku             (In my life)
Aku                       (I)
Menginginkanmu              (Want you)   
Ada disiku                 (To be next to me)
Selamanya               (Forever)
Namun kau              (But now you're)
Telah tiada                 (Gone away)

Kisah cinta yang              (The love story that)
Terjalin bersamamu            (Intertwin with you)
Takkan pernah kulupa           (I will never forget)
Kau abadi dihatiku              (You're forever in my heart)

Meski jarak memisahkan dirimu         (Though there's a distance between you)
Dan diriku                               (And me)
Cintaku padamu takkan pernah usai  (My love for you will never end)
#4August 27th, 2005 · 07:16 AM
I think it is a pretty good work. The guitar is a little out of tune, and it's a little bit longer than I'd want it to be. Beyond that, though, it's very emotional and I could feel the emotion put into it.
#5August 29th, 2005 · 05:16 AM
117 threads / 20 songs
1,422 posts
United States of America
i felt as if the previous post is slightly cryptic...

care to re-word?
#6August 31st, 2005 · 06:34 PM
14 threads / 12 songs
76 posts
Indonesia
Cryptic? which part? hehehe...
#7September 1st, 2005 · 05:52 AM
117 threads / 20 songs
1,422 posts
United States of America
this part,

from livadream: should not change so much, and still more on the main feeling..

  your post was fine, rayz
#8September 9th, 2005 · 07:59 PM
2 threads / 2 songs
14 posts
United States of America
adhere to love
all i can say is that i wish i had a voice like yours...oh the babes i could have met!!!
#9September 11th, 2005 · 05:15 AM
49 threads / 42 songs
493 posts
United Kingdom
Nice song with a great flow to it, you have a good voice. Would be great to hear this with the production job it deserves though - it sounds murky to me.

In all, great work mate.
#10September 12th, 2005 · 08:15 PM
46 threads / 33 songs
179 posts
United States of America
Nice song. Loved your vocals. Very emotional.
#11December 6th, 2005 · 06:06 PM
48 threads / 41 songs
144 posts
New Zealand
indonesian Lyrics! Fantastic, that's so interesting. Guitar badly out of tune though
#12December 7th, 2005 · 12:23 AM
2 threads / 2 songs
22 posts
Australia
this is great
this its mad, great voice, bit better production i think but overall its great and different with indonesion stuff,

good luck with future productions
#13December 8th, 2005 · 12:18 AM
17 threads / 15 songs
271 posts
United Kingdom
Good structure for a mellow song...it does have a lot of potential, actually could be a hit!
I wouldn't repeat the chorus in the end that way but finishing it with a powerful sentimental one instead.
Need some work with the guitar, strumming is not tight with the drums.
I really like your song, I'll play it again....damnit I'm getting sentimental...he
#14December 9th, 2005 · 05:15 AM
55 threads / 30 songs
1,558 posts
United Kingdom
The out of tune guitar and poor production lets this one down, but it's still a good song.  Like Geo, I had to play it again!
#15December 24th, 2005 · 05:33 AM
18 threads / 18 songs
125 posts
Canada
tune
Nice vocals at the higher registers. Nice chord structure. If you had some good musicians behind you, you could have something here.....
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