awesome! i love the melody. it's soo good.
the drum-work is good too.
you voice is great. very strong sounding, yet not over-powering
i can't understand the lyrics obviously, being that they're in indonesian, but hey i really like this one. i had no idea what to expect, but it's wonderful!
very good job. the chorus is especially cool, i think.
you've got talent, man. you've got it
the drum-work is good too.
you voice is great. very strong sounding, yet not over-powering
i can't understand the lyrics obviously, being that they're in indonesian, but hey i really like this one. i had no idea what to expect, but it's wonderful!
very good job. the chorus is especially cool, i think.
you've got talent, man. you've got it
The lyrics |
Glad you like it dude! I think music is a universal language and it doesn't matter what language we're talkin...it's all bout music! hehe...
OK, I'll explain you lil bit bout this song. The title it self "Adhere To Love" i think already gives you a clue bout what this song is all about. And the lyrics, ok I'll try to translate it into english so maybe it will help you to more understand bout this song and get in to it.
Masih kuingat (I still remember)
Awal kita bertemu (The first time we met)
Kita saling berpandang (We are looking at eachother)
Kaupun tersenyum malu (And you're smiling shame)
Terasa bahagia hatiku (My heart feels so happy)
Kuingin selalu bersama dirimu (I want to be with you forever)
Aku (I)
Membutuhkanmu (Need you)
Setiap waktu (Everytime)
Dalam hidupku (In my life)
Aku (I)
Menginginkanmu (Want you)
Ada disiku (To be next to me)
Selamanya (Forever)
Namun kau (But now you're)
Telah tiada (Gone away)
Kisah cinta yang (The love story that)
Terjalin bersamamu (Intertwin with you)
Takkan pernah kulupa (I will never forget)
Kau abadi dihatiku (You're forever in my heart)
Meski jarak memisahkan dirimu (Though there's a distance between you)
Dan diriku (And me)
Cintaku padamu takkan pernah usai (My love for you will never end)
OK, I'll explain you lil bit bout this song. The title it self "Adhere To Love" i think already gives you a clue bout what this song is all about. And the lyrics, ok I'll try to translate it into english so maybe it will help you to more understand bout this song and get in to it.
Masih kuingat (I still remember)
Awal kita bertemu (The first time we met)
Kita saling berpandang (We are looking at eachother)
Kaupun tersenyum malu (And you're smiling shame)
Terasa bahagia hatiku (My heart feels so happy)
Kuingin selalu bersama dirimu (I want to be with you forever)
Aku (I)
Membutuhkanmu (Need you)
Setiap waktu (Everytime)
Dalam hidupku (In my life)
Aku (I)
Menginginkanmu (Want you)
Ada disiku (To be next to me)
Selamanya (Forever)
Namun kau (But now you're)
Telah tiada (Gone away)
Kisah cinta yang (The love story that)
Terjalin bersamamu (Intertwin with you)
Takkan pernah kulupa (I will never forget)
Kau abadi dihatiku (You're forever in my heart)
Meski jarak memisahkan dirimu (Though there's a distance between you)
Dan diriku (And me)
Cintaku padamu takkan pernah usai (My love for you will never end)
I think it is a pretty good work. The guitar is a little out of tune, and it's a little bit longer than I'd want it to be. Beyond that, though, it's very emotional and I could feel the emotion put into it.
i felt as if the previous post is slightly cryptic...
care to re-word?
care to re-word?
this part,
from livadream: should not change so much, and still more on the main feeling..
your post was fine, rayz
from livadream: should not change so much, and still more on the main feeling..
your post was fine, rayz
Nice song. Loved your vocals. Very emotional.
indonesian Lyrics! Fantastic, that's so interesting. Guitar badly out of tune though
Good structure for a mellow song...it does have a lot of potential, actually could be a hit!
I wouldn't repeat the chorus in the end that way but finishing it with a powerful sentimental one instead.
Need some work with the guitar, strumming is not tight with the drums.
I really like your song, I'll play it again....damnit I'm getting sentimental...he
I wouldn't repeat the chorus in the end that way but finishing it with a powerful sentimental one instead.
Need some work with the guitar, strumming is not tight with the drums.
I really like your song, I'll play it again....damnit I'm getting sentimental...he
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