hey, this is my first ever fully recorded song. its all done on my pc, through my amp, a mixer, and thru the line in.(so plz bear with me through that) some spots my seem very drawn out, but thats bc the lyrics i wrote go there...unfortunately i can't sing, so gonna have to wait to put those in. i need LOTS of advice on playing, recording....ANYTHING!! :-P. thx a lot fo listenin.

forgot to add that the whole song was recorded in an hour, no mastering, or added fx besides the amp.

not bad at all, but if other instruments added,(drum,bass etc.), this song could be lively and sound better.

I like it mate, it has a nice chilled sound!

Constructive criticism:

Fix whatever that horrendous buzzing is...you have a loose connection somewhere!

Your playing seems fine!

The lead guitar is too loud and pushes the track into clipping (digital distortion). Watch your recording levels closely and wherever possible get a compressor in-line for electric guitar unless you have the dynamic control of a blues god (this style of guitar work needs compression anyway to be honest).

Overall, I like it - and I look forward to seeing this developed into a full song when you find a vocalist and work on some more ambitious production

Peace and

Nice melodic chilled out track, nice chord progessions. The playing is fine, and for an hours work it's pretty good!

Spend a little more time on the production and it will probably sound more lively. Could develop into something really cool. Try and get someone to sing aswell (yeh, I can hardly talk as I have the same problem).

thx

The sound of the rhythm guitar is very nice, the arpeggios youve chosen fit well and create a very good ambient.
Although I must say I would erase the solo and try again, its pretty off beat and insecure and badly distorted.
But once again its a very good idea you had in mind if you just could improve the performance would be great.