Well, I've been busy with this song yesterday, and it is my first song where I sing in :P... It is the first time i sing... well, I sound a bit strange I think, but... well give your opinion please

i like the tone!  and the synth-y noise and feel is great.

whatever combination of effects you used on the vocal is really good too.  the timing is a little off on certain parts, and there's not a lot of emotion to back the lyrics up, but it's certaily not bad!  i think your voice would be great if it were to open up a bit with some more zeal

nice   i likes.

revenge of the asian video game sound tracks! lol!

nice opening disto-synth riff

vox need some work but they show potential... lyrics need a little revision... but they still convey their feelings well: something regarding "lost" or a "search"

just keep working.

Man, this song is pretty killer.  The vocals sound good!  Very impressive especially for first singing experience.  The intro rocks.  I'm not sure how i feel about the bridge type part of the songs--no drums and such.  Whatever, though, it's cool.

peace

dude this sounds great!  i love all your other songs and it's great to hear one with vocals (which were pretty good, i'd just work on putting a little more emotion into the lyrics, tho you didn't do bad at all!).

can't wait to hear your next song bro, peace.

you should sing more often! me likes your voice! hehe good job!