This is great. Very, very intense. The pendulum at the beginning got me a bit annoyed after a while but the intro had me in sweats from the tension and the suspense. Then the break and melody... really great arranging and writing. This is a great tune, not quite my style but great nonetheless. I have no idea where you're planning on going with this if this is just a part but it's great to hear. In terms of improvements, the solo at 4:12 would sound great with 3rds layered on top and the little vocal solo could be extended and repeated with a harmony. The arranging is great but the lead and melody lack creatively. I think just adding some harmony and fills at key times, particularly at the ends of lines and when you have a lone voice (guitar or vocals) doing a repeat. Still great song. Had me on the edge of my seat throughout the intro and didn't disappoint.
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Si el pendulo al principio se convierte algo tedioso.
You could try feeling with some ambience thing the empty parts between the guitar space, es una opinion mas personal. En algunas partes los cymbals le hacen falta mas fuerza (a mi parecer). But is a nice song. See you around man.
Si el pendulo al principio se convierte algo tedioso.
You could try feeling with some ambience thing the empty parts between the guitar space, es una opinion mas personal. En algunas partes los cymbals le hacen falta mas fuerza (a mi parecer). But is a nice song. See you around man.
i like the reverb on the pendulum
You could fade out the pendulum
And for me, it needs a very tiny and "bassy" beat at the very back, when guitars kick in. Because without beats, its hart to understand the timing of the guitars.. It seems a little bit random.
The mix sounds clean to me, but its me. you know. It can be different from person to person, but I like it this way.
Like many others, I wonder what will come next ^_^
And for me, it needs a very tiny and "bassy" beat at the very back, when guitars kick in. Because without beats, its hart to understand the timing of the guitars.. It seems a little bit random.
The mix sounds clean to me, but its me. you know. It can be different from person to person, but I like it this way.
Like many others, I wonder what will come next ^_^
very very cool/ reminds me of some older Pink Floyd when they used to do more "out there" stuff, like lots of sound effects. love the "kick in the ass" @ 3:14/15 with the vocals. love the guitar lead /break , very cool .
nicely done with loads of great production.
nicely done with loads of great production.
Hmm...Do something to the intro to 'blend it' together a bit more, it's a bit long and separated, I'm not sure where it's going and I really think the guitar chops should somehow be worked into it better, when the guitar come at 1:41 it's on its own. Listening I really expected a totally cool guitar to come in and start building up to 'the song' much sooner.
You could even come in as soon as 0:37 with a lowish echoed smash on the guitar.
Yes the tick tock needs to either fade out, carry on and blend with the hart beat or
go tick tock tick tock tick tock tock tock tock .......
God it's so good when you actually do come in !!
You two really are very good.
I like the mellow 'paradise' part too, very chilled, it's like your playing with shock then peaceful then a shock then peaceful again.
I think Lisa should fade/echo out at the end with the 'poong' !
That end part, drums guitar and Lisa, is very powerful
Really like your drum track too.
A! It's so good to hear excellence again ! Cheers M!
You could even come in as soon as 0:37 with a lowish echoed smash on the guitar.
Yes the tick tock needs to either fade out, carry on and blend with the hart beat or
go tick tock tick tock tick tock tock tock tock .......
God it's so good when you actually do come in !!
You two really are very good.
I like the mellow 'paradise' part too, very chilled, it's like your playing with shock then peaceful then a shock then peaceful again.
I think Lisa should fade/echo out at the end with the 'poong' !
That end part, drums guitar and Lisa, is very powerful
Really like your drum track too.
A! It's so good to hear excellence again ! Cheers M!

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