a spontaneous song recorded using my own handmade Pow Wow Drum. (native american big drum) Ewashakintea is the Lakota words for "you will be strong"

I liked everything. Quality, composition.
...But I waited for a climax...

starts off a bit slow.... 30 seconds of silence would usually make me stop listening. You could make this into something really emotive and powerfull with a bit of work... It does have potential, but these are the things I would change: Imo, Youre voice is too quiet, It might be good to have it at that volume for part of the song and then bring it forward after a while. I think you could also try a bit of variation with the beat, making it a bit more complex after a while, and also bringing in the flute earlier, and making it part of the song. I also agree with Undream in that it would be good to have a crescendo of some sort.

Ian

I really like this. It's very different and very intense. As for criticism, its a bit long and you need to cut out the 30 seconds of silence at the beginning. I like the strings a lot but I think you'd do well with voicing another chord. Even just going from G to F as a progression instead of just staying on G throughout would help a lot. It's a nice idea for a song and your getting into a genre I've never heard on bandamp so kudos. Hope to hear more.