This is the original song so far, I haven't really started to add drums or base yet. This recording isn't really refined in any way, it was just a once through recording so there are a few... bad parts...

Really the only part I always seem to have trouble with is the part between the verses and the chorus (When I sing long high pitched notes). I have a lot of trouble staying in tune, but that will get better with more practice. SO! Besides those three sections what do you guys think of the rest of the song? I'm definitely going to add drums and base (Also I just recently bought an electric drum set). Thanks for your input,

Dustin