This is a little something I put together..Still not sure where to take it but so far I like what I have done...I just need to break out of it...Maybe develop into a full song with drums,bass  and electric guitars..Kinda rock ballad stuff.Suggestions?

Sounding very soundtrackish.... either that or Pink Floydish... I always dig these kind of interludes between rock... Got a great feel to it, nothing comes outta left field and interrupts the mood... As usual, solid workmanship.... Good show!   Wouldn't change anything..... maybe some experimental vocalization..?



Hao...

excellent that organ sound , floydish but some thing reminiscent of Iron butterfly ....indagagaof ida.
Wouldn't change a thing the guitars with keys beautiful mate..... expansion????? big orchestral timps may be option but as it is stands this is great .
lurve it

 

This makes me feel watching a Stanley Kubrick intro... well at least at min 2:45, where it reminded me Scorpions' "Still Loving You" a lot, actually it's pretty similar; you should check it out.
But the overall sound and feeling is amazing!
Great job here, as always.

          > Iszil

ace man! absolutely no criticisms. Its nice as just an instrumental but vocals would certainly give it another dimension.

Yes I know that track..I though about it when  writing this but I like the chord progression so I kept going with it...Tx for the comment!!

Definitely a soundtrack piece. Nice work M

Flyer

Nice Rating

Couldn't miss a chance to comment on this.

Stellar composition.  The song is structured beautifully.  Had I any reign over this, the end of the Scorpions-esque solo that closes the song would go into a huge break, sort of Rush 2112-style, and melange into a song.  Very good stuff.

Production is, for the most part, excellent.  There are a few hiccups in the solo, and at 2:11, the organ abruptly changes tone.  I'd recommend using some sort of envelope to smoothly change between the tone so that it's subtler.  I absolutely love the mixing with the different soundscapes and samples in the first half of the song.  It's epic and tender at the same time--beautiful.  I like the very simple rhythmic pattern that runs through the last half of the song.  The extremely gritty and dirty solo creates a nice contrast with the mellow tone of the rhythmic melody.  I'm not sure about the sounds that close the track off.  It sounds like something is about to happen and doesn't--although, as I suggested, that's exactly what I'd do.

I don't know about vocals for this track, or any percussion.  I would experiment with a heavily filtered and flanged wailing "ahhh" in the first half.

Bravo sir, bravo.  Stuff like this makes me come back here after months and months.

Yeah i could picture this being on the background of " A Clockwork Orange" or something... at least the intro...  Epic sound man.  Found myself singing the lyrics to "Still loving you" though...  Smacks of it a bit too much for me...  But man what can i say...classy!