I added more reverb to this and tweaked it up a bit on this version..I would like to add Bass to it later on and maybe some more instruments to it to bring it to a fuller recording.....Hope you all like it




" You Want Thing's I Ain't Got"

I give you diamond rings
and then I feel like
I've committed a sin
I keep giving you things
that I ain't got
I gave up my
Cuban Cigars
so you can drive around
in a fancy car
I keep giving you things
I have not

You want to be
a movie star
I drink from happy hour
until its last call
I give you things
but I need to stop
I cant afford to go to the beach
I cool off with
a water hose
you want things
that I just ain't got

you only know me
on payday
where the hell
is my runaway
train
I keep giving you things
I ain't got

Thank God for
rainy days
the phone's off the hook
But I'm not away
you want things
that I ain't got

I say things that
you want to hear
baby pass me a cold beer
I keep giving you things
that I just ain't got

I gave up my
Cuban Cigars
so you can drive around
in a fancy car
I keep giving you things
and I have not

I cant afford
to go to the beach
I cool off with a
water hose
you always want things
that I ain't got
Lyrics/Music/Vocals/Composition
Flyer7747
1:21 PM 6/17/2008

Hey flyer, it's been a while since i heard one of your songs and i can tell you've improved a lot!

A few things i can notice (not much really)

• I'd like to hear the drums a little drier.  With that much reverb a lot of accent is missing.
  
• Maybe some eq on the guitar would work as well
  
• I'm really missing some simple guitar riffs going along with the vocals... that would work for me.
  

But very nice song overall. 

I can hear the vocals better, which is good cuz I like the words and your singing style...

Oh Yeah the vocals are up in the mix  and lyrics , deadly
Mate you know we are some of your biggest fans , you got a authentic core soul and it's reflected in the music .
Really dig this one

 

Thanks for the nice comments

I'll keep the suggestions in mind aetheris..Mixing is my biggest problem..Thanks again

Flyer