#1June 24th, 2008 · 04:31 PM
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#2June 24th, 2008 · 04:53 PM
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Get out of that kitchen & rattle those pots & pans

Nice job

Denis
#3June 24th, 2008 · 09:28 PM
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I hope you find the time to complete this one..nice going

Rates

Flyer
#4June 25th, 2008 · 10:35 AM
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United Kingdom
im liking the synth mixed with the bluesy guitar. goes surprisingly well. looking forward to hearing the final version, but please lock those drums in a cupboard until they starve to death... they sound like they came from a toy keyboard... sorry

otherwise, good stuff 

Ian
#5June 26th, 2008 · 01:19 PM
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work in progress
hopin for a brass section recording session saturday morning.............
turn this around before end of month?????
vocs added sunday .............

hey is this a challenge within the month ............ i hope so ............ lovin it..gets my ass in gear!!!!!!!!!
#6June 27th, 2008 · 03:15 AM
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Latvia
I like it,I just don't like the synth with it.
To me it doesn't go well. But I do love the guitar part.
I didn't really like the electronic cymbal in my left ear the whole time.
If anything pan it to both or go back in forth with the synth for a cool effect.
Other than that it's alright.
Not one of my favorites from you.
#7June 27th, 2008 · 02:20 PM
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well i agree in the most part ...................

theres a first

its work in progress

   fish
#8June 28th, 2008 · 03:06 PM
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United States
Not your best swordy....
If would encourage you to start the horn section first with drums and bass(maybe the guitar but no solo yet).Once that layout is done i would then work the solo guitar and maybe the synth..The potential is there but needs to sound a bit more organized.I do know you pointed out work in progress and still in the idea stage but that take sounds a bit cluttered to add on too.
anyways go for it and good luck!!
#9June 29th, 2008 · 12:42 PM
140 threads / 78 songs
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United States
I think there is a timing issue here, sounds really jumbled...  not real tight....  Definitely a work in progress...  I would try to lose the electronica feel as much as possible too, to make it more rock and roll..  Otherwise would be a great soundscape piece once it's tightened up...
#10June 29th, 2008 · 07:19 PM
132 threads / 34 songs
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Netherlands
SirBorris wrote…
please lock those drums in a cupboard until they starve to death... they sound like they came from a toy keyboard...
It's not a toy keyboard ...it's one of those toy teddy bears that bounce up and down with the cymbals on it's head. !!! 
I'm well into the guitar tracks, nice r&r rhythm and some screaming lead, as JimK said tightened up it would be kikin!
The synth is following a rock and roll melody, wouldn't it be better off doing something else? I mean like another melody and even another synthy sound. it is a squidgy house era sound after all.
Looking forwards to a finished product.
#11July 1st, 2008 · 02:52 PM
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