Hey, everyone, I finally came up with something.
It's 100% my style of song. ;D
I recently got an electric guitar so this one is a lot better than the first one.
Recorded in Audacity, as always, and uploaded to fl studio.
The solo at the end of the song is a huge pile of SH*T actually. The end of solo sounds wrong, because I was pressing the strings too hard, and the pinch changed.
Also the drums in acoustic part sound horrible.
But I think this song has potential.
Please comment and rate, I hope you enjoy it.

It has strength and I like the changes. True, there're a couple things by the end that you can fix, but it already sounds very good, specially at the beginning. I like the acoustic part, too. You can do a lot to it, but the concept is already very clear and I can well completely enjoy it. Great style!  Rated.

As you said the idea is there and a quite good one it is...Theres some guitar tone issues I would also consider to work on.The drums are quite good ,I would try messing with some velocities to humanize them a bit..In anycase excellent idea and a good start for sure!

That's a pretty decent intro into the kick arse guitar...I like the way you change up...change the pace of things...That's a good thing..it keeps the listener(s) interested..at least it did me...nice drums,,,,just missing lyrics and Vocals i think..it would make this rock even more...yes the ending does need to be worked on...the guitar is way off in the mix..other then that  good job...


Flyer

Will Rate this song

I really like this!  Builds into quite a cool chorus.  Technically I cant add anything to what's already been said, but to me its sounding pretty good!  Any lyrics in mind?

Rated,
Kobeshi