Just something that came to me at 3 am a few mornings ago...Not much to it and there is a glitch or two in the recording...hope you all like it

Flyer




Baby, Its You

Verse 1
Of all of the things I ever wanted
of all my dreams to come true
the only dream that mattered
was the one
I was having with you

Verse 2
Somewhere in time there is a place
Can you feel the love
we must embrace
its bigger than time
its larger than space
it can't be kept in one place

Chorus:
Its you
Baby, it's you
its you
Baby, its you

instrumental:

Verse 3
On those lonly nights
when I think of you
it makes my heart
burn with desire
a eternal fire

Chorus:
Its you
Baby, it's you
its you
Baby, its you
Lyrics By:
Flyer

Very nice love song, Flyer!  Yes, music usually keeps me up till 3am or 4am too!  Look, it's already 3:45am.
I like it as it is, but still I think the rhythm does not change much from a part to another... specially to the chorus. For example, you could emboss verse 2 by singing it in 3rds or by adding a 2nd voice, so you don't need to move from the style that makes up the song. Anyway, I enjoyed listening to it, very nice work

Thanks Andi....I actually did have a bridge and a another chorus to this. I cut it out from this version...I was thinking that because this is along the lines of a oldie's (song) sound and back in the day..oldies were very short songs...some were only  2:00-2:30 seconds long in the length of playing time....You can hear the cut off at at the 1:47 mark...your comment(s) are very accurate and right on ..there isn't a change in the chords because of the cut off...Thanks so much for taking the time out to have a listen and to leave a comment...I may do a second version with the bridge and the 1 added chorus...

BTW...The chords do change from Verse to the chorus but they are also chords that are used in the verse's So, your right in that respect. Here's the break down
(its very simple to be honest)
Verse
G Em C D
Chorus
C Em

Flyer

3:00 am dude thats crazy!!!!!Anyways another nice melody and good feel song flyer...Always a pleasure to hear your new ideas..

M.

Yeah..It's crazy Marino for inspiration to come at you at those hours...But, when creativity does find its way to you ..you have to get it down then and there...I can't begin to tell you how many times and how many idea's I have lost because I didn't get to it until later on..like the next morning...By then I had completely forgot how the tune/idea's went..lol

Thanks for your comment and support Marino..it sure does mean a lot buddy

Flyer