#1April 28th, 2008 · 08:52 AM
70 threads / 24 songs
331 posts
Norway
Brown Shoes in The Sun
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Wind blows around everywhere
and there is love in the air.
Sit on my favorite chair.
Feeling too easy to care.

Sometimes I believe it is.
Sometimes I don't think I am.
Sometimes I don't think it is.
And sometimes I know I am.

Brown shoes in the sun.
Doesn't like anyone.
Now the time has come
for me to be gone.

Sometimes I believe it is.
Sometimes I don't think I am.
Sometimes I don't think it is.
And sometimes I know I am.

Sun shines around you, love.
But not on you, love.
On my shoulder a dove.
No one on yours, love.

Sometimes I believe it is.
Sometimes I don't think I am.
Sometimes I don't think it is.
And sometimes I know I am...

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#2April 28th, 2008 · 12:41 PM
10 threads / 9 songs
35 posts
United States
Wow you post a lot of songs. I really like the harmonies. How are you doing that btw? Please get back to me on that.
#3April 29th, 2008 · 03:01 AM
4 threads / 3 songs
80 posts
Argentina
   Wow!
Amazing!   Very original concept and the lyrics are very good, as they don't have one only concept for all the song, but go putting small concepts in every part of the music. Like you mention the sun and the wind always in the first verse and on the slow parts, which makes feeling of a desert, but in the faster parts (chorus), you express confusion instead.
The more I listen to it and read it, the more things like that I find. Very highly rated!  Congratulations, Kine!
#4April 30th, 2008 · 04:59 PM
80 threads / 61 songs
953 posts
United Kingdom
Great creativity Kine.

I love the pick up and the acoustic guitar playing the Bass line.

Really nice harmonies.

Production is also improving.

Well done!!!

Denis
#5April 30th, 2008 · 06:59 PM
32 threads / 17 songs
551 posts
Canada
I am very much enjoying watching you grow 

I like the harmonies...the raw sound of their discordance...
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