I wrote this yesterday. Another simple one but I think it has potential. Feel free to respond. This is still kind of a rough copy

Lost out on the plains
Stuck out in the rain
I have nowhere to go
Stuck out in the snow

Lost out deep in space
Stuck out with the gamma rays
I don't know which way to go
I don't see any stars I know

Lost out deep in the jungle
Try to push forward but I stumble
They pull me down with their claws
Pull me down to their maws

Lost at sea
I'm so lonely
There's nobody
Here but me

I'm Lost out on the plains
Stuck out in the rain
I'm lost out deep in space
Stuck out with the gamma rays
I'm lost out deep in the jungle
I try to push forward but I stumble

I'm lost at sea
I'm so lonely
There's nobody
Here but me

I love your voice, and the guitar is pretty tight.

The lyrics seem a little simplistic, but aside from that I'd say it's a pretty awesome song.

I LOVE your voice!  It fits this song perfectly!  As you say its simple, but often that can create some of the best songs.  I would let the simplicity run into your lead guitar...because at the minute for me its a bit continuous.  I think it would be a lot more powerful if you broke it up...so have it come in here and there in little birsts or odd notes.  An amazing example of this is a Dire Straits song called 'Brothers in Arms' (beautiful song in itself). 

Enjoying this a lot,
Kobeshi

dude this is really good especially the guitar bit are you playing by yourself or with another person

i found a rythem to go with this one too