| the Narrow pass |
about the walk of faith in my life and how that faith carries a future in it and hope to become a better person than I used to be....
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But what about those that those that carry a different faith than yours? Do you see them as different? Or do you see them as those that could exist with you, instead of against you. Add some connection to those that you despise. It will add some humanity to the words of your song. Take this to heart for it will be not be hard to see the true beat. Find your own and you will be fine. Great work. And I mean great work! Great feel. What conviction!
-EGGY
-EGGY
The main guitar rhythm is great, real nice flow, I would love to hear a real drummer play along with it, although I still like your percussion.
Your vox are nice, although I would be carefull with your pitch, I find sometimes if you try too hard it can tence you up, which can throw you off key. They say bring the sound up from your stomache, which is the root, supporting your notes, but at the same time you have to relax your vocal chords, it's hard to do, I've have tried this technique, I'm no master at it by no means, but I've noticed an improvement, then again I don't practice my vocals at all LOL!!!!!
Anyway always a Joy to hear your music, keep 'em coming!!!
Denis
Your vox are nice, although I would be carefull with your pitch, I find sometimes if you try too hard it can tence you up, which can throw you off key. They say bring the sound up from your stomache, which is the root, supporting your notes, but at the same time you have to relax your vocal chords, it's hard to do, I've have tried this technique, I'm no master at it by no means, but I've noticed an improvement, then again I don't practice my vocals at all LOL!!!!!
Anyway always a Joy to hear your music, keep 'em coming!!!
Denis
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I can't say it enough about your stuff, I am truly becoming a fan... This is wonderful! Very fun to listen to, and very uplifting spiritually and emotionally.. You truly have a gift.
As Denis said, Keep em coming!
JimK
As Denis said, Keep em coming!
JimK
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